The Wind

The Wind It’s a dark night I hear the whistling through the trees “Pitter patter” the sound of the rain falling I closed all the windows and all the doors I can still hear the rustling of the leaves on the ground It is Fall my favorite season of all A chilly windy rainy night in mid-September The wind sounds like wolves howling or like spirits who make noise at night after dark when the spirit world is closest to this world.

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/15/2016 9:45:00 AM

I feel happy to read ur poem. With simple English a great write. Very impressive piece.@7@.......with love

Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/15/2016 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Manmath. I appreciate your commenting on and liking my poems.

Malcolm Dyer

Date: 4/9/2016 5:06:00 AM

Wow you painted a nice picture keep up the good work

Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/9/2016 11:33:00 AM

Thank you Malcolm!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/19/2015 11:22:00 AM

I agree with Njeri, a very discriptive write.

Ayesha Karim
Date: 11/19/2015 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Richard.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 8/20/2015 6:05:00 PM

It feels like i was there. you described this so well

Ayesha Karim
Date: 8/21/2015 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Njeri. I'm glad you liked my poem.

P.I. Alltraine

Date: 8/14/2015 5:08:00 PM

Lovely imagery. :)

Ayesha Karim
Date: 8/14/2015 8:22:00 PM

Thank you again, I'm glad you like my poems!

Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 8/4/2015 5:11:00 PM

Incredible imagery Ayesha! Well done! Thank you for sharing it.

Ayesha Karim
Date: 8/4/2015 9:12:00 PM

Thanks Irfanulla. I'm glad you liked the poem.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/19/2015 1:59:00 AM

Great poetic imagery in delightful freeverse. Nicely portrayed. Thumbs up. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Ayesha Karim
Date: 6/19/2015 5:30:00 AM

Oh I will. Thank you.

Hannington Mumo

Date: 6/1/2015 6:47:00 AM

Enormously expressive. 7!

Ayesha Karim
Date: 6/1/2015 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Hannington.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/29/2015 9:40:00 PM

You have expressed my favorite season so well!!!!

Ayesha Karim
Date: 5/30/2015 5:19:00 AM

Thank you Art.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2015 3:37:00 PM

yes, the wind is a great poetic topic. Nice one, Ayesha

Ayesha Karim
Date: 5/19/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks.

Constance La France

Date: 5/18/2015 11:52:00 AM

Ayesha, a wonderful poem, so visual and well done, 7, time to write another poem, and thanks for visiting my poem, the storm

Ayesha Karim
Date: 5/19/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thank you.

Naghmeh Heidari

Date: 4/20/2015 11:39:00 AM

Hi Ayesha, nice rainy poem. Glad to meet you, Thanks for reading my poem. Best regards

Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/21/2015 6:38:00 AM

Thank you Naghmeh!

Constance La France

Date: 4/11/2015 9:19:00 AM

Ayesha, I like your free verse a lot, it is full of beautiful words and lines, well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, I, Poet

Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/11/2015 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Broken Wings.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2015 6:48:00 PM

:) glad you did

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2015 11:23:00 PM

Ayesha, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA

Ayesha Karim
Date: 4/6/2015 6:35:00 AM

Thank you. I had a great Easter!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/25/2015 7:59:00 AM

This is very well written with impeccable imagery. Emile. #7

Ayesha Karim
Date: 3/25/2015 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Emile.

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/15/2015 9:09:00 AM

Very real and compelling descriptions you have here. I like your little note too. Perhaps the note could be worked into the poem itself; I believe that would give it an extra dimention.

Ayesha Karim
Date: 1/15/2015 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Isaiah.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/27/2014 4:31:00 PM

Ayesha this is such a beautiful mystical write! You have the poetic gift and we need to read more of your work so I am begging you to share more of this gift with the world. Warmest regards. Pandita.

Ayesha Karim
Date: 12/28/2014 5:07:00 AM

Thanks Pandita. I appreciate your kind words.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/10/2014 7:53:00 PM

Hi Ayesha, the two things I love about September, are, when the wind changes, and October is near... :) You did well, many lines were descriptive, I can hear the howling wind. Yes, Like a wolf... and my granddaughter, who loves to howl like a wolf... :) Awesome poem...LINDA

Ayesha Karim
Date: 11/11/2014 9:12:00 PM

Thank you.