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The Usurper King Premiere Contest Winner

"My Kingdom will rise above all others. I'll always put it first." He spoke with the devil perched upon his left shoulder, but no angel sat on the right of this diabolical sinner. The king pointed his scepter; his lemmings did his bidding. Dethroned, he claimed foul to the point of 'ad nauseum.' A whining child, toy taken away; unworthy of the crown. Like Humpty Dumpty, he fell from his wall, his ego shattered. Making up alibis while his lemmings battered and defiled. "I'm innocent," he scowled, to his fealty of blind worshippers. Promising, he'd be a phoenix, returning to reclaim the throne. "Nay," vowed the judicial Knights of the District's Realm. Unfit, the usurper who tried to topple their country's domain. The Verbal War was fought. For months on end, battles raged. It was the age of absurdity, neither faction would retreat, and in the end, no one won, but the homeland was the loser. The abuser, bent on vengeance, stalks those he condemns. Millions cried, "Clip the wings of the phoenix! He's no leader. His lies have breached beyond belief, and caused much grief!" In southern lands he now resides, licking his festering wounds while declaring, "It's just the beginning." and so the villain looms. February 14, 2021 Biting Satire Contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 3/14/2021 3:57:00 PM
Excellent, Jenna! Let's hope the villain's influence wains as indictments loom over his crown.
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Date: 3/14/2021 8:14:00 AM
A wonderful monologue and a well deserved top win! excellent! I could only think of a vulgar yellow haired clown, and nobody else! great write!! The devil is still around!!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/14/2021 11:08:00 AM
There is only one who fits this mold. Thanks for your comments, Krish.
Date: 3/14/2021 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jenna, a well deserved win, I knew this one would be hard to top, so I’m delighted to be just behind you, snapping at you heels, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/14/2021 11:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, David, and congratulations on your high placement.
Date: 3/14/2021 4:43:00 AM
Your outstanding poem is pitch-perfect in terms of exactly what I was looking for, Jenna:-) . An allusion satire with a potent sting! Heartiest congratulations on your top spot win!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/14/2021 11:07:00 AM
Thank you, Edward. I'm so very honored by your award and enjoyed having a chance to expose the usurper a bit more.
Date: 3/13/2021 11:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your top spot win with this marvellous Dramatic Monologue Jenna. Well done! Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/14/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Belle.
Date: 3/13/2021 11:16:00 PM
Brilliant! Congratulations on your well deserved 1st place win, Jenna.~ Sus :))
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Jenna Logan
Date: 3/14/2021 11:06:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 2/14/2021 10:50:00 PM
Now why do I feel this is a satire on Trump? ~~
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/15/2021 6:20:00 AM
I’ve not mentioned any names on purpose, but it’s not because I’m protecting the guilty. :)
Date: 2/14/2021 8:23:00 PM
Exceptionally well done, friend. I see a first place winner here! Congratulations in advance, and thanks for sharing this with all of us.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/15/2021 6:16:00 AM
Thank you, ML. Once I started writing this one, I couldn’t stop. Unfortunately, I fear it’s an ongoing tale of woe.
Date: 2/14/2021 3:28:00 PM
Sounds like the beginning of a terrifying saga, I hope you turn this into a big book for fans, lovely
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/15/2021 6:13:00 AM
It started 4 years ago and deteriorated from there. Thanks, Mystic.
Date: 2/14/2021 1:40:00 PM
I dont think there's a prize for guessing this one, I know he plays golf lol. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 2:42:00 PM
You are a prize, Tom. This would-be king plays at a lot of things. Thanks very kindly.
Date: 2/14/2021 12:00:00 PM
Very sarky Jenna, but so much truth embedded in medieval tongue, I’m thinking Vlad the impaler, with a combover under that crown, best of luck in the contest, cheers david
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/14/2021 2:39:00 PM
Does Vlad have a fake tan and orange hair beneath that crown? lol at your combover thought. Thanks so much, David.

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