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The Southern Blue Swallowtail

Southern Butterfly The Green dill gave him a thrilll Caterpillars born Caterpillars gone Dill eaten none remains now Empty stems no chance

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Johnny H.

Date: 7/13/2009 1:51:00 AM

i love these nature-related poems of yours. and thanks for the comments too.

Denis Joe

Date: 7/12/2009 1:43:00 PM

I like what you have done here Sara. It is a very novel way of presenting the narative. The way that you have composed this threw me and I had to read it a couple of times to appreciate it. It is a great poem which reminds me a bit of Cubism. For me the actual meaning (which isn't clear) is not the point. What is important is that you seem to be experementing with excellent results.

James Fraser

Date: 7/11/2009 4:05:00 PM

Pictures of bright flowers in summery meadows in my eyes, lovely Haiku Sara>>James

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/11/2009 3:37:00 PM

This is a beautiful butterfly, great work...Raul