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The thorns over grown and tough Rip the flesh from her aging skin Difficult as the chore may be She prunes where others haven't been Deep in thought as she does the job Gloved hands remove the shoots A distant glance shows a good change Tender young parts buried take root Some say she's too old for change Just let the thick thorns remain Time will tell if she did well And if the pruning's healed the pain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/13/2017 2:17:00 AM
Smooth, beautifully penned; had to fav'it.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/13/2017 6:07:00 AM
M.L., I am delighted that you found this one suited to your fav's list..Thanks for all of your visits to my page each time you take time to comment lifts my spirit..Sara
Date: 6/8/2017 7:54:00 PM
Tender Loving care, Mrs Sara. So nice:)
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Date: 6/4/2017 11:51:00 AM
- Yes, time will tell ... beautiful poem,Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/4/2017 5:02:00 PM
Thanks so much for stopping by..I appreciate your kind review..Sara
Date: 5/25/2017 3:44:00 PM
Indeed... Very nice Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/4/2017 5:03:00 PM
Thanks for the kind review..Your presence is appreciated at my work..Sara
Date: 5/23/2017 4:08:00 PM
love this gardening gem - I can picture you pruning as I read this
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/4/2017 5:03:00 PM
AHHH!! Thanks for the kind review..I can't do much out in the garden anymore..I just don't have the stamina anymore..Sara

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