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The River

A canal, far away, was built many years ago for the ships' passage between two oceans. A river, near me, slowly flows, floats the barges. And, years ago, this dove- colored river was open for the wars. Today, distant lights on the river are a moon's glow, and one or two are stars, that poke the dusk through the hush of falling snow, to the Summer warmth of a shelter, where onyx tinctured mares have wings, to fly through at night. Their snow-white wings are soft as flour, and their hooves are as magical as the Ruby Shoes in the dream.They tear through, weave tatters into fear. They tat a net, with the silky gleam of tinsel, to catch the diamonds that prick the sky, cut into an artist's canvas, who paints this nightmare.. the very edge of 'morn spills cream hues, lifts up a gold rose. The river sparkles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/11/2021 3:37:00 PM
A pleasure to find your lovely poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Jennifer~
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Date: 11/8/2020 5:27:00 PM
Jennifer, what a lovely, exciting poem. It is truly worthy of the recognition it is receiving. Congratulations on your win! May I be so bold as to invite you to submit to my 2021 Visionary contest?
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Date: 11/8/2020 2:21:00 PM
Wow, amazing choice of words and images! Congratulations on your win Jennifer.
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Date: 11/8/2020 1:40:00 PM
Congrats on a wonderful win. I like the interesting style of taking one line down to the next stanza!
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Date: 11/8/2020 8:02:00 AM
Lovely imagery Jennifer. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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