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even heaven’s stars can be misaligned the reports of her passing greatly exaggerated a wrong number and evil intent came together “How is my friend?” “She died today.” “When are the funeral services?” “There won’t be any services!” CLICK like playing telephone, passes between the pews, the news of Lazarus…weeping ensues, towels passed out…we all could have passed out if this saint had showed up on Sunday next, praising with all get out stone’s been kicked away…the one that the evil one laid the devil lied, using the mouth of a man…oh man telephone rings and rings and rings, call after call, throwing us all, for a loop. nevermind the toss and turn as we thought of our friend at heaven’s gate…the gait a bit slower than we thought. kiss, kiss, kiss her face…her halo will have to wait

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Date: 6/10/2024 4:51:00 PM
Kim, funny how the idea of misinformation is historic. I was recently studying info on Thomas Paine. The British hired biographers to create total falsehoods about him. The lies were remarkable. This was a couple of hundred years ago.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:14:00 PM
Isn’t that something?! Wow!
Date: 6/7/2024 3:21:00 PM
Whoa, this is so fantastic, with the unique voice that you only do; seems a little cutting to the core, but kind....beautiful work, Kim xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 6/6/2024 7:57:00 PM
once again, 'greatly exaggerated,' as are the reports of my death, frankly. (Editor misspelled 'dearth,' which I do have a lot of...).
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/11/2024 5:15:00 PM
The fix is in…not for your demise. Stay around!
Date: 6/6/2024 6:05:00 AM
A biblical story with gender reverse? Great write.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/6/2024 8:11:00 AM
Told someone died…the information thankfully was not correct.
Date: 6/4/2024 5:10:00 PM
I enjoyed the intertwining of a Biblical event with the alleged passing of a friend. I liked the intrigue and 'strangeness.' Well done, Kim. Wishing you a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2024 8:07:00 PM
Bless your evening, sweet Sara! Thank you!
Date: 6/4/2024 4:52:00 PM
very touching, but strange story, you wrote it with talent and emotion, great poem Kim, thanks
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2024 5:01:00 PM
Strange day indeed!

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