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The Perils of Camping

Sleeping in a tent at night Zippered in cosy and warm You and me then bugs take flight In a cloud they swarm They hover round choose their prey Your perfume means they bite me In my sleeping bag I lay then off to Dawn (P) Allan Williams for Bite Me contest (as I am new I went for some else new Dawn Pulido) 9~4~2012

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Date: 1/31/2016 8:50:00 PM
ALLAN, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 1/28/2013 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations!! Off to a great start...thanks for your comment on my "A Longing" poem...Have a great day!...xx Holly Moore
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Date: 6/17/2012 6:27:00 AM
Thanks for sharing! Hope all is going well for you! Have a great day!!! JP
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Allan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:33:00 PM
Well done. Welcome to our fun center. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:05:00 PM
Gosh, I hope Dawn did this too? That was sweet of you to include her. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:58:00 PM
Allan!! Congrats on your win! well done! big hugs, love debs
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:52:00 PM
congrats Allan on your success in my contest with this super entry luv.. reminded me of my teenage days ..
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Date: 4/9/2012 12:04:00 PM
you just made me wounder if I am ever do camping 'cause I don't like bugs, thank you though ,like your poem,Ivy
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