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the mystery of the girl and monsters in the fog, lost, precarious knocking, lighthouses, antique dresses, the back and forth of my imagination. at sea - the deep, dark movement of unseen waves, unremembered dendrites firing at each suspenseful turn. the real storm, unrelenting all-night-feast of thunder cracks and lightning bolts - has Frankenstein’s monster come alive? the scary knock at the door - don’t answer it! we laugh so hard, how imaginings and story support our fear. likewise, the top of the hill - are you kidding it’s dark? one must not venture where one might spy a host of trouble; but the girl you’d follow in the drizzly mist, to the fashionable past - inviting, suspiciously exciting, an escape. with monsters, well…watch out for the tale - a little-red-riding-hood-precautionary blow. 7/2/2022

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Date: 7/11/2022 9:13:00 PM
A tale that is worth telling more than once Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:35:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 7/7/2022 8:29:00 AM
Intriguing and engaging tale my friend. You kept me wondering and thinking throughout the poem and beyond. :-) Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/12/2022 6:35:00 PM
Awesome! Thanks, Bill!
Date: 7/5/2022 11:52:00 AM
Monsters real or imagined can be scary, Nicely penned Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2022 6:32:00 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 7/5/2022 6:24:00 AM
So intriguing and interesting... Beautifully penned...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2022 10:05:00 AM
Thank you, Supraja! :)
Date: 7/4/2022 2:27:00 AM
:)Delightful! One cannot write poetry, if opposed to mystery, suspense and just plain outrageous fantasy! So many wonderful lines and images in this fine work. Great read! Thank you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2022 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so much! xx
Date: 7/3/2022 12:51:00 PM
So creatively creative, fantsy and reality with the marvellous storyline to cater to the senses.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2022 2:48:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/3/2022 1:09:00 AM
You have excellent fantasies. Lovely poem. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, my friend! ~ hugs!
Date: 7/2/2022 8:24:00 PM
'Imaginings and the story' certainly are a potent combo!! Really enjoyed the back-and-forth of this creative tale, Kim! ~ Boo! :) Werewolf calling
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/3/2022 5:50:00 AM
LOL! Thank you!

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