The Mosquito

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slammed the mosquito on my face, clearly missed it~ what spurs me for that?

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Joseph May

Date: 8/25/2022 6:07:00 PM

They are pesky little insects, and it seems quick too, Nicely penned Sotto

Valsa George

Date: 8/22/2022 8:22:00 PM

I hate it more for its 'music', than its bite. Another great haiku...! Anybody would slam it, Lasaad !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2022 10:55:00 AM

The picture made me chuckle. I’m glad you missed it.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/21/2022 10:43:00 PM

I have had an attack from them. Lemon juice is best for cure.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/21/2022 7:40:00 PM

hope it didn't hang around, Lasaad, hate the darn things, Good haiku though.