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The Morning Sculptor

the gloom splattering the morning sculpting the void the life from the death

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/6/2018 11:26:00 AM

I love this, Probir. Morning and sunrise can lift so much heaviness and gloomy thoughts.

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/6/2018 9:19:00 PM

Yes ... Except when the clouds overtake ... Thanks ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/5/2018 12:09:00 PM

I get the feeling that one is dealing with a death in this one but not sure. Enjoyed reading your work. On my work "A Borrowed Tomb", I did not stay exactly to form like I should have put that one flowed without much effort. Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2018 8:27:00 PM

The almost spontaneous flow then has really added a gracefulness to the whole poem ... as for death that you have referred to, I would like to request you to look at the wonderful shapes of life at sunrise following the sort of death at night till the sunrise ... thanks for liking the poem ... Probir

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/4/2018 8:37:00 PM

Very nice, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 4/4/2018 8:58:00 PM

Thank you ....