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The Magic River

Deep inside the forest of the Elvin King. There flows a magic river from an ancient spring. They say its special waters hold the mystery of youth. And should you take one little drink you’ll know that it’s the truth. The waters all originate from way up in a fountain. That’s hidden very cleverly inside of Elvin Mountain. The extraordinary liquid looks like little diamond chips. Granting youth to everyone with one or two small sips. The river has a secret that is only known to elves. For centuries, the mystery still kept between themselves. They say it is the reason that they live so very long. And that aside from giving youth it also makes them strong. People come to drink the waters from the distant lands. Even from the ocean and the beaches rich with sands. Everyone has tried to guess its power through the years. Little do the people know the river’s strength is tears. For every time a little baby elf begins to cry. They take the little baby tears up to the mountain high. They drop them in the fountain where they travel down the spring. Creating all the magic that the river waters bring. One small sip of precious water on a person’s tongue. Will instantly transform them to the way when they were young. So if you find the Magic River take a sip or two. For it will surely make you feel just like you are brand new.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/27/2023 11:35:00 AM
Hello Samia Ali Salama, so nice to meet you. I like this poem. It will be my fav. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\
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Date: 9/27/2023 10:40:00 AM
Wow..wow! What a refreshingly beautiful poem! You have so lyrically spun a marvelous story, with flawless rhyme and meter. Astonishing! Do please keep writing such brilliant poems. God bless you always!????????????????????
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Date: 8/9/2012 10:22:00 AM
Hey! I'm 83, and I'd like to baby sit for that baby. This is a priceless fable. Love it. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 8/10/2012 6:59:00 AM
Hi daver, Thank you so much for your comment. I'm so glad you liked it! :)
Date: 8/6/2012 9:21:00 PM
SAMIA, Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care. *Luv* PD
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 8/10/2012 6:58:00 AM
Hey PD, Thank you very much! :)
Date: 6/12/2012 9:49:00 PM
Not down here either. hahaha
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Date: 6/13/2012 4:46:00 AM
Yes, I can't find that river either! LOL Thanks for reading this Andrea! :)
Date: 5/24/2012 3:18:00 PM
This was good! If only, I'd be there with ajug in hand.
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Date: 5/24/2012 5:27:00 PM
Hey Vince, I'd be there with you with a great big bucket! LOL Thank you so much for reading. :)
Date: 4/6/2012 4:30:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much. No, I posted it after St. Patrick's Day. :)
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:34:00 PM
what a great imaginative poem. I wonder if you posted it on St. Patrick's Day. They sure love legends in Ireland!
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Date: 3/31/2012 8:08:00 PM
Hello Samia - Such a unique and original story. Love it! Couldn't stop reading once I started because I had to know more...and reach the ending. - Gail
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 3/31/2012 9:20:00 PM
Hello Gail, Thank you very much! I'm really glad that you liked it. :)
Date: 3/30/2012 8:36:00 AM
I love story poems... A great write!
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Date: 3/28/2012 5:19:00 AM
Samia, welcome to P-Soup! Hope you will read, comments and share alot of poem with us. You do it so well, I like "The Magic River". Have a lovely day in sunshine! - oxox love from Norway and Anne-Lise
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