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The Little Red Ant Who Came To Visit

A little red ant scampered over my blanket and climbed just to bite me and visit as I fell asleep. ~~~ With my eyes closed I felt him crawl by the picnic basket to my guest who just arrived, eyes now on Tracie. ~~~ written by Michael J Falotico for "Bite Me" contest sponsored by Linda (Jersey Girl) Sweet Heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/16/2012 8:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Michael! I love the picnic scene. So cute!! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/16/2012 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Bite Me" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 4:11:00 AM
Congrats Michael on an awesome win,, like it!!
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Date: 4/15/2012 1:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Michael xx
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Date: 4/14/2012 9:18:00 PM
Ants can ruin just about anyone's picnic! Great job with this winner, Michael. Title is inviting too. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:51:00 PM
Congratulations, Michael. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:11:00 PM
Big congrats, Michael. and thanks for my win in your note contest, such a cute idea!
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Date: 4/14/2012 8:08:00 PM
lol...Congratulations on your win Michael...well done...big hugs,love deb
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Date: 4/14/2012 7:29:00 PM
congrats Michael luv on a super duper win for this sensational entry luv.. JG in "bite me" mode.. xo..
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Date: 4/7/2012 8:59:00 AM
thankxx for this cool entry for my crazy contest Michael luv.. good luck ..hope u had fun composing .. thankxx for Easter wishes ... u are welcome for birthday wishes... what day is it exactly..?? 19th seems to be sticking in my head luv.. JG in party mode .. xoxo..
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Date: 4/6/2012 9:40:00 PM
thankxx for supporting my fun contest Michael luv.. since I am sponsoring .. could not receive your "bite" so glad u chose Tracie .. good luck luv.. JG in happy mode ..now that u are here again luv.. xoxo..
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Date: 4/6/2012 8:59:00 PM
This is an awesome write my friend! I rather have feelings of angst for ants! They have crawled all over me before and it seems that they all nit me all at once. Oh the pain that I felt then! How many bit you in this write? It seems to me just one, imagine all of them biting you! That's pain right there! You've written a fantastic write here Michael! I love your poem immensely!!
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Date: 4/6/2012 8:01:00 PM
This is so sweet for Tracie, she gets to be a guest at a lovely picnic, but oh no, she is going to be BITTEN. Good one,Michael.
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