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The Little House

The little house stood all alone down by the shady brook and it seemed a happy place to those who stopped to look. No one could have seen the house it couldn't tell so how could anyone have known that things weren't going well. The house had once been happy with a family made of three a mother, father and a son had filled the house with glee. But as time marched along the father passed away the mother boarded up the house and took the child away. For many months the house sat there all alone no more to hear the family play the house was not a home. The empty halls would echo the air was cold with frost no one knew the memories the little house had lost. Alone and so forgotten the little house would sigh and pray for someone else to come in hopes that they would buy. Then one day it happened a family made of three moved into the little house and set its spirit free. *The first poem I ever wrote*

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Date: 12/25/2019 4:38:00 PM
You know, I wrote a poem The Gallows when I was 13. Would you care to take a peek & tell me what you think?
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/25/2019 6:01:00 PM
sure
Date: 12/24/2019 11:32:00 PM
Very well done for a first. Even houses weep alone.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/25/2019 3:36:00 AM
Thank you kindly
Date: 12/8/2019 3:12:00 PM
wow, Robert. your very first??? It was excellent for your very first one!!
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/8/2019 4:32:00 PM
yes that was my very first poem written back in the 1980's thank you so very much
Date: 12/5/2019 10:11:00 PM
There is something absolutely lovely about a first poem, and this one rises to the occasion, my friend.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/6/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thank you very much appreciated

Book: Shattered Sighs