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The Leaving

Promises broken; Scattered in the winds of change- Dreams forever lost.

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/4/2015 6:58:00 AM

Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 4/4/2015 11:50:00 AM

Thank you so much for the comment. Grace and blessings. Jan

Jan Allison

Date: 3/11/2015 5:18:00 PM

Beautifully penned Janet I so love the impact of these short forms:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 3/11/2015 5:59:00 PM

Thanks Jan. I played a lot with the form several years ago and am thinking of writing more in Japanese forms and include some tanka and choka. It makes me structure my thoughts and I've been unstructured for a while now..lol