The Laundromat

In another lifetime, I was there
As sudsy clothes, a’jumble,
Went round and round until removed
In damp and twisted tumble.

Into the dryers they would go
While I just sat there, reading,
To help the time go by so boredom
Skulked away, receding.

When dry, the folded sheets and such
Into my cart were nestled
And schlepped to my apartment,
Up five flights I daily wrestled.

We moved within a year to where
Our building’s basement hosted
A bevy of machines to which
An elevator coasted.

Yet when I pass the laundromat
There’s surely no debating
That I don’t miss those days of carts
And inconvenient waiting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/25/2019 12:42:00 PM
My apartment complex has washing and drying machines on every floor, and dirt cheap compared to public ones. Big help and big savings. / M
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Date: 9/23/2019 4:26:00 PM
who would have thought washing day could be so exciting Ilene, you turn an ordinary event into an extraordinary poem and that is why I love your style so much!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/17/2019 5:52:00 PM
Loved the penultimate verse! Pure genius! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/17/2019 5:41:00 PM
O, 'a bevy of machines to which the elevator coasted.' One would think that you have moved to a castle! And compared to the laundry scenario before, I guess you have! :) gw
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Date: 9/17/2019 4:46:00 PM
Oh, I remember lugging huge pillow cases filled with dirty clothes to the laundromat. Now I don't think I could live without my washer/dryer. Glad to hear you now take an elevator to your building's washing area and don't have to go outside. Enjoyed the nostalgia... Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 9/17/2019 1:46:00 PM
I can't say that I have ever been to a laundromat and now after reading your poem can honestly say I am glad I haven't. Nice one Ilene
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