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The Lake For My Sake

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Getting nostalgic around days by the lake. We moaned while touching the pond's water. The lake's base shimmered with life and hake. As love, spirit and peace aren't a clumsy bailor. Nothing moves as I stroll out onto the lake. See the moon's full splendor in insight. A great time is in the offing for my sake The lake cottage has its own quality sleight. From the morning's veils to the cricket's sing; Midnight shimmer, noon a purple hue. And the night is full of a linnet's wing. I hear lake water lapping the shore and grew. Summer by the lake is my most loved place. We can sense the water underneath our feet. What a series of subtle signals you pace. As a deer might be viewed as an omen meet. You will be unquiet on the dance floor. Shadow is an awfully tasteful player. The morning dew shines with rich spoor. Awareness of one's own being the conveyor. A speck of sand got lodged in your hair. Bronze in its design phase July desire. Step near, my love, and sustain the snare. I recall your gaze emitted a blaze of fire.
Written: September 10, 2021

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Date: 9/10/2021 7:54:00 PM
Lovely Lasaad, your poem takes the reader to the beautiful lake so eloquently described in rhyme… Belle
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Date: 9/10/2021 6:21:00 PM
Wow, some very fine images here, Lasaad. I enjoyed your rhymes and the flow of your time on the lake. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 9/10/2021 12:53:00 PM
You take the reader to a very tranquil place Lasaad, superb imagery. Tom
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Date: 9/10/2021 12:48:00 PM
You seem to have fun at the lakeside. It is one of my fav subjects.
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