The Hitchcock Thriller

Some love too little, some love too long,
some they answer the riddle but fail to move on
some laugh and  others cry
when truest feelings have been denied
Some do the act with a show of tears,
surrendering everything showing their fears
And some without a sigh;
they just let their pride die
For some men kill the things they love, 
power given from up above
Yet each man does deny.
power from heaven they devise

Some kill love when in their youth,
some kill with abuse
And some when they grow old;
in the end the scam unfolds
Some smother with the hand of greed,
turning away from the hand of need
Because of lust for gold;
the way of love had turned old
The evil use their tongue because,
of vengence to discover
It takes love where it’s cold
and evil thought it mutters

But men who kill the girl they love,
and claim a passion from heaven above
have a story to be heard; 
lets not listen to one word
Some do it with a callous look
with a  wisdom from the good book
Some with a bitter word;
and with some with passion never heard,
The tyrant does it with his fist,
and serial killer with his list
The weak man with a sword.
a genious that was bored


(A collaboration by Elizabeth Wesley and John H Loving III)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/16/2011 2:21:00 PM
Hey John, You did a great job with this, I can't remember when we decided but you didn't give me any notice so this is the first I've read. So gald I found it! TC
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Date: 12/16/2011 8:28:00 PM
It won aplace in a contest
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Date: 12/16/2011 8:27:00 PM
You were notified.I was ignored
Date: 11/14/2011 11:31:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one. What part was yours and what part Elizabeth? it felt like the same person wrote it all the way thru. Great way to collaborate!
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Date: 9/30/2011 1:15:00 PM
Wow, what a powerful poem, John. You and Elizabeth have a very insightful look at human behavior here. Incredible, but often true! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:02:00 PM
I see congrats are in order dearest, told you this one was perfect for the contest :-)
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:49:00 AM
Nice job-very powerful-congrats. on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest John III. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Natalie, John
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Date: 9/28/2011 10:40:00 PM
Congrats John on an excellent win with these dynamic words reflecting the contest theme.. superbly penned luv..
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:28:00 PM
deep stuff....sad of the saddest when she just fades away due to loneliness.
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Date: 8/25/2011 5:13:00 PM
Hi John, Soup mail for you.
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Date: 8/23/2011 9:44:00 PM
Hi Johnny, you did a great job - like it, Sorry I took so long to read but have had a busy day and am just now getting on Soup to read. Did we have fun with this one?
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Date: 8/23/2011 5:44:00 PM
intriguing indeed...a collaboration with...? and yes I agree with the comment below, many different things within this...
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:33:00 PM
Wow John! I see that this is possibly a collaboration? But please tell me about it!Their are so many different things in this.I would love to know the story behind it all.If you don't mind?
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:54:00 PM
Please forgive me John...As I went back I noticed it said funeral.I didn't see that the first time.I am very sorry I didn't mean to sound so rude in my comment.I am truly sorry.
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