The Haunted House

THE HAUNTED HOUSE The dark shadows flicker, hapless waves crash — against the abyss a lover’s hopes dash. Latter years, melancholic, dressed in black, arrival of the vampire’s curse - I’m back. A Victorian castle with misdeeds. I sweep the grounds. Small feet kick away weeds. An imposing door knocker — my heart beats stealing my breath...I faint as the door cheats, opening by itself — wispy fingers, like frost outside the house, the chill lingers. Awaking to old decrepit beauty — timbre of a music box on duty. I pry at doors, webbed windows — none will jar. I’m locked in with whispers and dust...no stars. A heavy painting with traversing eyes further freezes my blood — he resents goodbyes. I know this, but why? Why?! Wind from the cliff — I’m screaming...falling. Those ghostly fangs stiff. Reminded, I trek up the long staircase. It’s intrical railing like woven lace. Hypnotic melody — the lover’s bait. Face of gloom — at the precipice, he waits. He sinks his lusty teeth into my neck, throws me down frightful stairs. I’m at his beck and call — his revenge for forsaken love. Each night we kiss at the cliff and he shoves. This castle of curses and vengeful ghosts. Ever dusk to dawn, it’s nightmare I host. 8/15/2018
2nd place/multiple placements Sponsor - Dear Heart Contest - The Haunted House Tribute to t.v. show Dark Shadows

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Date: 9/16/2018 8:01:00 PM
I'm a little late, Kim, great imagery and story. Big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2018 8:21:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! <3 Kim
Date: 9/5/2018 11:18:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome write, it was spellbinding to read, well done !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2018 8:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance!
Date: 9/1/2018 6:01:00 PM
Outstanding Kim! Lines like this "Awaking to old decrepit beauty —timbre of a music box on duty." kept me enthralled in your story. Congratulations on your second placement! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2018 6:25:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 9/1/2018 12:38:00 PM
Love this one, Kim. Congrats on your win! Charlie :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2018 12:45:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 9/1/2018 11:47:00 AM
A haunted house with a bite..Congrats on your win Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2018 12:22:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 8/15/2018 7:43:00 PM
Only the Shadow knows...and it senses a winner in the darkness...great entry Kim...love & shadows...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, WW!
Date: 8/15/2018 2:48:00 PM
Wonderful spooky poem Kim, I remember Dark Shadows, good luck in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 8/15/2018 12:00:00 PM
I don't know the tv show but loved your spooky tale:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 12:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Jan!
Date: 8/15/2018 11:37:00 AM
This was fantastic Kim. You make it look so easy. Your meter and rhymes are spot on and the storyline was scarily wonderful.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2018 11:41:00 AM
Thanks so much, Chris! I loved watching the show years ago. :)
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