The Greatest Star

. Cobalt Blue Sky Calls Stars sparkle come on higher Cross on the land bridge

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Mitch White

Date: 4/12/2010 4:08:00 PM

Very good interpretation Sara- How do you center it?

James Fraser

Date: 4/11/2010 5:37:00 AM

Nice take on the picture in Gareth's contest, you may well be on the podium with this piece >> James

Marty Owens

Date: 4/10/2010 10:31:00 PM

Very nice Haiku...enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty

John Freeman

Date: 4/10/2010 10:15:00 PM

Sara my favorite and star Haiku writer.Smile! The greatest structure ever built. The land bridge to the heavens of glory. Little did they dream of the awesome bridge they had built in the simple structures of the cross Sara! It was the ultimate bridge that connected the throne of God to the earth.Good Job here Lady. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/10/2010 7:54:00 PM

Great images conveying explicit images

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/10/2010 7:15:00 PM

This is an awesome haiku, Sara, and I haven't even seen the photo yet. Your poem stands alone as a work of art. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/10/2010 6:25:00 PM

great words to compliment the picture. well done Sara.....Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2010 5:38:00 PM

Excellent Haiku and good luck in Gareth's contest Sara... have to go back and look at the photo..luv.. Linda-Marie..