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The Great Indian Bustard

Hybronnet Poem, 14 lines, 10 syllables per line. ------------------------------------------------------- Brown, white, grey, black crown, across breast black band Colors saturated with calm grassland Too Heavy for a bird, too tall a bird Too less vision, too shy to fly a third A Haughty look, loves clear view, regal stance Just 140 left in the world, at glance The Great Indian Bustard now rare bird Changing landscapes pushing it to a word Rewilding is a lie, damage control, Programs, Funds, afforestation, all swell Management, Planning are scrabble words play Critically endangered bird display A barren land, for want of just land clear Piece of undisturbed grassland, now so dear

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Date: 10/1/2024 7:19:00 AM
thriveni, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, lovely poem, Constance
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Date: 10/9/2024 7:36:00 PM
Kind friend, Thank you for your precious time and effort in holding these contests. I am so grateful to you for I am learning to write in new forms because of you. I am so very happy to know you like it. Thank you for this happiness dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/17/2024 4:12:00 PM
A very interesting Hybronnet on The great Indian Bustard, looked them up, what beautiful birds they are, it’s so sad they’re becoming rare. Congratulations on your win in Constant’s contest thriveni… Beryl
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Date: 9/17/2024 9:18:00 PM
I am grateful for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you for your interest and time in looking at those beauties. did you observe their stare? Because of their lesser vision they don't blink often so the look is captivating. Thanks again poet, Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/16/2024 7:17:00 PM
Unfortunately many birds are becoming extinct. When I was young, I could see hundreds of sparrows on rooftops and by the side of drainages. Now hardly I see any. I wonder if Indian bustard belongs to the peacock family. Sad they are an endangered species. A beautifully written hybronnet. Congratulations dear Thriveni.
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:52:00 PM
we do have a few sparrows here. when they chirp sweet I feel like suffocating them by hugging! ah, thank you for your kind visit dear poet friend. your words means so much to me. thank you. Cheers.
Date: 9/16/2024 4:07:00 PM
Wow! Wonderfully written Hybronnet my dear poet friend. I'm not familiar with the form but I can see you did an excellent job on it. Great imagery, rhyme flow and everything. Thanks for sharing this gem and also this bird. I'm an animal lover and I'll look this up later. Congratulations on this superb Hyronnet and your shining win!You're a very talented poet. God bless you always and your writings.
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:49:00 PM
Thank you my dear poet for your kind visit. This poetic form is new to me too. I am glad you liked it. The bird is a beauty, blends in with beautiful mud brown. Its stare is to die for, so arresting. you'l love it I am sure. thank you for your kind words, I am grateful for your blessings. thank you.
Date: 9/16/2024 2:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. I had to look up the bird to see what it looks like. I have never heard of one and when I looked it up, I knew why. It is a bird on a different continent. Thanks for sharing this information with us. Sara K
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:45:00 PM
thank you dear poet for your kind visit and interest in the near extinct bird. your kind & happy words means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/16/2024 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I do not know this bird. Thanks for writing about them... Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:43:00 PM
cheerful poet friend, thank you for your kind visit. I am glad you liked it. thank you for the blessings. Cheers.
Date: 9/16/2024 1:55:00 PM
It's unfortunate that these birds are on the brink of extinction, it's all too common to see animals vanish
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:42:00 PM
Yes it is a serious issue, but we are preoccupied with wars. no time to save mute ones. Repugnant sadness. your visit is precious to me dear poet, thank you for your words. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/16/2024 9:11:00 AM
Your vividly descriptive poem is expressive and informative. CONGRATS on your placement, Thriveni. Janice
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:37:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet.I am glad you liked it. your happy words means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/16/2024 8:52:00 AM
So sad to witness the demise of such a lovely creature. Your poem says it all brother Thriveni.
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. sadder it is to be mute spectators. I appreciate your words, thank you. Blessings.
Date: 9/16/2024 5:39:00 AM
Back to say yaaaaay your poem had placement! Congratulations poetess!
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Date: 9/16/2024 6:45:00 AM
thank you for the cheers dear poet friend. your visit is special so is your kind words. thank you
Date: 9/15/2024 1:37:00 PM
I bow to you for your accomplishment in writing in this challenging form! Thriveni I was educated, engaged and enlightened about a subject an animal I’ve never heard of before. In fact I’m going to google it so I can see a photo! Great job!
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Date: 9/16/2024 3:09:00 AM
Ah you! dear poet friend, your words fill me with pride. I am glad you liked it. challenging it is to rhyme for me. I am grateful for your kind visit and happy words dear friend, Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/11/2024 12:02:00 PM
Aw that's too bad, Thriveni. Thanks for introducing them to me. I just watched a video showing them. They're a cool looking bird.
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Date: 9/12/2024 8:36:00 AM
Thank you dear poet for your kind visit. I am so glad you took time to look up. Sad they are at the brink of extinction. thank you, blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/11/2024 6:32:00 AM
You've drawn attention to something important, I am made aware now, thanks
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Date: 9/12/2024 8:34:00 AM
I am grateful for this pleasant visit and kind words dear poet. thank you so much. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 9/11/2024 5:43:00 AM
Another species driven to the brink. I'll have to pull up an image. Nice write
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Date: 9/12/2024 8:33:00 AM
I am so grateful for your kind visit dear poet. Thank you. means so much to me. Blessings & cheers.

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