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For all the kids young and old a blanket of white white snow winters prettiest of days earth our house cleaned that way pure was made the land covered the wickedness of man living water had a plan clean the cities and the land on inspection spiffy clean sin and wickedness went unseen oh how wonderful the christmas scene peace on earth thats the theme

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Date: 7/27/2024 9:27:00 AM
Nice poem! Congratulations on it being featured on Soup!
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:21:00 PM
Nice to read this cool poem in the middle of a heat wave. I think peace on earth is just a dream though; there's a few that have the resources to kill that dream. Hope all is well with you! :)
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:29:00 PM
Lovely gift,and beautiful poem.Peace on earth. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:58:00 PM
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could be cleansed as you say; I have a feeling that the millenium will produce this kind of result.
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:58:00 AM
enjoyed your peace....the peace that passes all understanding!!
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Date: 1/18/2011 7:35:00 PM
all the best to you! situation!!! welcome to the soup!!! jimbo
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:05:00 PM
Peace TS,..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:13:00 PM
Great ending..If we as human being could just follow through on peace on earth..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits this eve..Sara
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:00:00 PM
living water...sounds like John 7:38
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:08:00 AM
Just GREAT! Earth is renewed by the fresh snow. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:37:00 PM
Beautifully and wisely written about the winter season and with a message of faith,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 12/25/2010 9:27:00 PM
love it
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Date: 12/25/2010 4:22:00 AM
Very christmas ie ... Good job
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