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The Future Is Now

in shady glens the wild iris bloom like jewels strewn on dark velvet in shadows the forest keeps her secrets life abounds in its silence the fawn waits patiently leaves rustled in the wind-early man walked softly close your eyes and dream of places untouched by man the future is now Barbara Gorelick written for Constance La France and her contest 4-in-1

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 11:33:00 PM

This is so cool. It feels like time standing still in past and present. Dreaming of future. Loved the way the whole thing unfolded. Congratulaitons, Barbara.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/7/2011 6:26:00 PM

Wonderful write !Congrats Barbara on your win in the contest---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 1:41:00 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Constance, Barbara

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/7/2011 1:29:00 PM

BG congratulations on your win with this beauty :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2011 12:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's "Nature, Four In One" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:33:00 AM

This was truly an awesome write dear B G. Warm congrats

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 11:04:00 PM

awesome poem, different in its protest at man and his devastation. really love this. congras Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 7:51:00 PM

Congrats on your win, dear LNC! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 7:34:00 PM

Congrats BG on your exciting win in Constance's contest with these rare and beautiful words luv.. enjoy another chart topping poem and win ...

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/28/2011 4:26:00 PM

beautifully writen. john h loving iii

Wayne Sapp

Date: 2/27/2011 5:48:00 PM

Nicely done Barbara! Unfortunately, just a little over 3% of the United States is untouched by man, according to then forest service and the Sierra club.

Constance La France

Date: 2/27/2011 2:16:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 1:48:00 PM

Super entry BG .. good luck in the new contest.. your words flow together so beautifully.. keeping the elegance of Nature bright..

Date: 2/27/2011 10:40:00 AM

A beautiful write, enjoyed.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/27/2011 9:14:00 AM

The beautiful places that are yet untouched by man eventually will become only a dream. I watched a documentary of plastic found in the untouched depth of the ocean. Very descriptive and I could close my eyes and walk the path. God Bless Phyl

Eamon Duffin

Date: 2/27/2011 8:04:00 AM

Hi Barbara. Thanks for your kind comment. This a an absolutely beautiful work. I walked this path in your words. The very best in the contest. Eamon

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/27/2011 7:58:00 AM

awonderful write as rich as " jewels strewn on dark velvet, barbara... winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2011 7:51:00 AM

I continue to dream of places untouched by man, dear LNC. Would have preferred to live in the time of early man. This is eloquent and powerful. Goes to my faves and I think it will be a winner. I won't have time to write for this contest, but did try John Freeman's and Carol's because I could write them quickly. I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Will call you after I'm home. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/27/2011 7:29:00 AM

Nice string with the continuity in the theme of nature places untouched, barbara