The Fiddler's Cat

An ebon sky, darkness to light
Diamond stars, mosaic night
Bright lunar sphere of brilliant white
Floodlights a scene of will and might.
The Fiddler’s Cat, sips warm Bordeaux
Fiddle to chin, strong paw to bow
Rosin to bow on amber ice
Wide upward swing, long downward slice.
A rotund dish, the restless spoon
Race through the night below the moon.

Ah, Fiddler’s cat empties Bordeaux
Strikes violin strings, with Dante’s bow
He plays of sorrow, he plays for chance
As spirits soar, he plays to dance.
He plays of peace, he plays for hope
To love and trust, he plays the most.
Fading ebon screen, pale ginger sky
An exhausted shrug, a weary sigh.

A new ordinance decreed by spoon and dish
Keep catnip away when serving fish.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/13/2019 9:12:00 PM
Another awesome write Michelle. a wonderful tale!
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Date: 7/1/2016 12:57:00 PM
This be one crazy cat - sipping bordeaux and playing the fiddle. Nip will do strange things to kitties. Love, daver
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 7/2/2016 11:33:00 AM
I'm thinking of the kitties we'd had, at my childhood home there'd been catnip growing wild in a field near us. I would pick some, smell it, and wonder what they'd found so exciting about it.:(
Date: 5/27/2016 8:48:00 PM
You are SO dang good, Michelle!! Loved that ending!
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Date: 5/27/2016 8:48:00 PM
fave poet too!
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Date: 5/7/2016 7:34:00 PM
Well, it's official. I have to start following you. You're a very talented poet, and the things you write are so entertaining. =D
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Date: 1/21/2015 8:19:00 AM
A lovely slant on on Edward Lear's 'The Owl & The Pussycat. It worked well for me, except the Bordeaux, I love that more than I do cats! Lovely write, Thak you for sharing. God Bless .D
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Date: 1/18/2015 9:19:00 AM
I like this poem so much. It is very visual and I have cats which makes it special. It doesn't matter when the violin was invented, The cat always had one!
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Date: 12/19/2014 2:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this . Your words are colorful and invoke visualizations of a background
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Date: 12/19/2014 2:31:00 AM
Nice
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Date: 12/17/2014 11:42:00 AM
very nice....
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Date: 12/17/2014 5:45:00 AM
It's a natural tale of a colourful feline. Nature has got a lot of potentialities. A very good poem. Kudos.
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:50:00 PM
Wonderful Poem Michelle. I like the rhyming :) :) :)
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:42:00 PM
Lovely.
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Date: 12/16/2014 6:36:00 PM
fantastic poem flows really well and I love the great rhyming
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Date: 12/16/2014 5:21:00 PM
What a marvellous experiance. It is one of the best couplets I have ever read. And what a great take on a childhood classic. Totally impressed. I just hope that i may be able to write in this calibre one day. I am still giggling! I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry over the next few days.
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 12/19/2014 1:43:00 PM
Oh, I read your writes, you are above and surpass me! I'm not sure which rhyme you might choose, but please tell me when you do! Some of them really could use a facelift. :)
Date: 12/16/2014 5:18:00 PM
Michelle, I once saw "Fiddler on the Roof" in New York. Your poem is delightful read, putting me in touch with picturesque night. Truly you're master poetess. Happy Holidays, God bless ...irisrose...
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Date: 12/16/2014 3:59:00 PM
A well crafted poem. I read it a couple times. Content and rhyme work well together in it. It is an entertaining take on the old nursery rhyme. Booze, fish, and catnip might be an intense combination for a cat, but if his adventures read this well why not?
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Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 12/19/2014 2:43:00 PM
I was going to comment on your poetry, instead I'll share some Lewis Carroll? "If seven maids with seven mops Swept it for half a year, Do you suppose," the Walrus said, "That they could get it clear?" "I doubt it," said the Carpenter, And shed a bitter tear. Might need the cat to cheer him up? Merry Christmas! Mikki
Date: 12/16/2014 3:11:00 PM
Michelle, Another most wonderful couplet here. The verses flow so very well and the imagery is quite exquisite indeed. Enjoyed this one immensely. Another "7" and a FAV from me. I invite you too, to drop by read my poetry as well anytime you wish. Best Always!! Gary
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:23:00 PM
A little scat from the fiddler's cat can get you through the night. A sip, a draw, a swig, pa-shah. If kitty is a mean drunk, keep your distance from it's claw. Fun little write Michelle. Wishing you a very nice holiday season. Peace. :)
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:46:00 AM
VERY NICE
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:20:00 AM
Nice light-hearted little poem with some interesting imagery. You could do with less commas.
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:02:00 AM
Excellent poem adorned with diamond words conjured a nice magic where whole picture is beautifully screened. Genius only and simply. Loved always, my poet friend,bl
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Date: 12/16/2014 9:01:00 AM
a stunning masterpiece, I am just taken,
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Date: 12/16/2014 8:44:00 AM
Brilliant work. Every line a delightful surprise. Love it.
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Date: 12/19/2013 7:36:00 PM
fiddlers cat he likes a snooze, when he aint on the bordeaux booze, nothing left to perchance lose, till the plonk does overcome :} plonk=booze great poetry babe...
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