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The Doorway To Dreams

************************************************************ "I open the door and cross the threshold of imagination" Here Inside I can see Untamed beauty A place of true hope and of perfect peace A wondrous world where love conquers the hate Refuge is found In still night's Within Dreams Desires Resting Earnestly Amidst Midnight Slumbers Petitioned upon pillows Daily devotions Confess sleep’s supplications ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Chiquita Chiamaka Baity August 04, 2011 Tetractys Acrostics Haiku Contest Name: Three Gems Sponsor: Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 8/16/2011 1:01:00 PM

Dear Chiquita, Congratulations on YOUR Win in Constance's Contest "Three Gems" I came upon this Superb POETRY as I was reading all YOUR Tetractys' a form in which YOU are very Well Versed in "Falling Tears, Nature's Time, Thoughts, and Smiles and Frowns" All Captivating I have put YOU as One of my Favorite POETS Can't decide which POEM is my Favorite Maybe All of Them With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/13/2011 9:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in this contest sponsored by Constance La France "Three Gems" Chiquita. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2011 12:13:00 AM

A most interesting format. Congrats on your win. I enjoyed the forms you used.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/12/2011 11:57:00 AM

Congrats Chiquita on your amazing win with these brilliant lines of great expression luv...

Don Johnson

Date: 8/7/2011 4:35:00 AM

great poetry babe, the words we crave, absolutely...

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 8/5/2011 2:55:00 PM

you are a poet and a true painter of words.

James Peranteau

Date: 8/5/2011 8:01:00 AM

I'm just over whelmed here dear poet, with your talent ! This is such a fine example of Tetractys Chiquita ! I love what you've done with this write ! Just awesome ! Have a wonderful weekend....much love, james

Carol Eastman

Date: 8/4/2011 4:15:00 PM

Great writting. Very creative.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 2:26:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Chiquita. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/4/2011 1:17:00 PM

Very nice take on the theme of the contest, a teacher's example to follow. Chiquita

James Tate

Date: 8/4/2011 10:33:00 AM

My, what a poem you have there, Chiquita. Very well done. My editor's cap suggests one small change in punctuation--If you mean "nights" to be only one make it "night's". If more than one make it "nights'". Thanks, too for your nice comments on my sleep poem.

Judy Ball

Date: 8/4/2011 8:44:00 AM

WoW! What a clever presentation. Very well thought out beautiful description of everyone's dream. Sounds like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 8/4/2011 6:52:00 AM

another killer poem. I am going to read all of your posted poems. gimme a cpl days. don't get frustrated if a ton of people do not read your stuff. A lot of this site has to do with who comments on who. I wish people would be truthful. It's hard to win contest if you don't sit on this site for 6 hrs a day and shove compliments down ppls throats. Well, I'm not down with that. BUT, I will tell you that I deal with writers on a daily basis, and you have RAW talent. Keep em' coming.

Kurt Vella Petroni

Date: 8/4/2011 4:27:00 AM

wow, deep indeed.

Joanna Davis

Date: 8/4/2011 3:14:00 AM

Awesome…I’m amazed at your perception and clarity of expression

David Bailey

Date: 8/4/2011 1:15:00 AM

Wow, that is really good. Makes you think bout the beauty of a dream.