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The Daughters of Mother Mary

Chastity is the jewel of a girl and character ,the ornament of a woman Exalted are the women of such ornamentation Like a diamond , like a precious stone Not to expose , A girl of such Tone(Type) Like a motherland , like a home The dignity of a girl Mariyume(Virgin Mary)…. Clubs are not the places of the Holy Frau The trade of a girl is not worthy of a nation Not are the sons the whore-monger of daughters! Like a shield in the battlefield, are the sons of the nation Character of a girl , the character of a nation Future builder are the daughters of the nation Spoiling a girl , is spoiling a nation Making not marring is the Job of the belle(Beautiful) creation Purity ,Modesty is marking up(marking up is increase value) a girl Making her the Mother Mary of the nation Chastity is the jewel of a girl and; Character,the ornament of a woman Exalted are the women of such Ornamentation

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Date: 3/3/2018 7:49:00 PM
Well Muhammad you have hit the nail on the head and me being a woman will agree with all that you have said, so very well written, take care my friend.......Vera
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 3/4/2018 12:20:00 AM
Thanks Vera for your sincere and true feedback . This is not only for women.Men are also corrupted so men and women both need correction. I mention women because she makes the family right and she makes the nation right. Take care as well , dear....Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/28/2018 8:27:00 PM
I really like this one. I think men are the downfall of women. When & if she says no. And he or "they" do it anyway. Then she is branded a whore/outcast. I think you must start teaching kids how to be good humans from birth on. Thank you for reading my words Hidden Path" :)
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/28/2018 10:50:00 PM
thanks Debbie the right education is necessary...........
Date: 2/25/2018 5:18:00 AM
It is true that in the quality of its women, so shall a nation rise or fall- and this is in so many areas - in the way they raise their sons . A peaceful home makes for a peaceful world.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/25/2018 6:25:00 AM
thanks Suzanne ...........completely agreed with you........and thanks for being here on my page...really appreciated
Date: 2/25/2018 12:13:00 AM
Females in your life must feel the respect you addressed so beautifully. My mother taught me, "If I acted like a lady, the men would act like a gentlemen" . It worked! I like you do not call myself a poet, but you express you're emotions nicely...and you re comments! bbn
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/25/2018 1:05:00 AM
i am pleased to have a great feedback from you. I like the quote of your mother and you mentioned it here because you are the example of it. thanks MI
Date: 2/24/2018 1:57:00 PM
Enjoyed reading nice tribute to the purity of women
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 2:07:00 PM
Thanks Eve for reading my poems and making lovely and sincere comments. Really appreciated
Date: 2/24/2018 1:21:00 PM
It s another well written poem of yours, I really thought that I have visited your page before but I guess that I missed it, so I must say that you have written your poems really beautifully, all of them including this one which shows the current situation of this world and you have given a really nice example on purity, good luck and continue to write such heartfelt poems
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Fraz for your sincere comments that are really source of motivation for me to keep on writing ...thanks again
Date: 2/24/2018 1:11:00 PM
Men have the capacity to help women maintain their purity when they maintain their own. Sadly weak men and women find each other. You speak of the Virgin Mary, are you of the Christian faith? if so you are you truly blessed as a son of Abraham and a follower of Christ.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 1:42:00 PM
Yes RIchard , in our case sacrifice is also there. but it depends on the nature and gravity of sin. If the sine is small then mere repentence is enough. But if the sin is big it require a big sacrifice. eg if you kill some one then the sacrifice is you will also be killed as justice ...but if you are repentful and the victims forgive you in return for blood money then it is also allowed. if u did not return some loan , you cannot be forgiven unless you return the loan and ask for forgiveness........All the religions of Abraham have such punishments so far i know.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/24/2018 1:26:00 PM
Thank you both for sharing your thoughts. For me the sacrifice is essential for the remission of sin. Once I have received this gift my actions are to please God whom I am relationship with. I can not earn this love I always possessed it. I was simply in a state of unawareness.
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Faraz Ajmal
Date: 2/24/2018 1:19:00 PM
Well I'll help you here coz I know about both faiths,Muslims believe in Jesus and his virgin birth, we believe in all prophets but we don t believe in his crucification and resurrection , we believe that God raised him up alive, secondly we believe that God is one, not triune and Jesus was Messiah , not God, the statement of Deuter my 6 4
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 1:18:00 PM
Hi RIchard thanks a lot for making beautiful comments... i love mother Mary and Jesus Christ as part of my faith...I am Muslims and believing in Mother Mary ,Jesus Christ and our fahter Abraham all are mandatory in our religion ... thanks again for making a beautiful comment.
Date: 2/23/2018 7:54:00 PM
A strong character this woman by the sound of it. You have penned this very well Muhammad....Maria
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/24/2018 1:13:00 AM
Thanks a Lot dear Maria
Date: 2/18/2018 2:20:00 PM
The world needs more women like the ones you've so beautifully described, Muhammad! Janice
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/18/2018 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Janice for your lovely and sincere comments
Date: 2/11/2018 1:42:00 PM
"Character, the ornament of woman". Profound.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/11/2018 11:08:00 PM
Thanks Leanne.........this poem is for females only, otherwise character is for men and women both.
Date: 2/8/2018 3:12:00 PM
There are sadly not very many women like this left today! Too many are so spoiled.. And it's sad, for truly "the hand that rocks the cradle rules the nation."
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/10/2018 11:25:00 PM
HI Andrea. I am very thankful to you for your feedback based on reality and nice reference to William Ross......... Sincerely Muhammad
Date: 2/5/2018 12:49:00 PM
A very nice poem, Muhammad. I enjoyed reading it and appreciate your point of view regarding girls. Check your soup mail.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/10/2018 11:05:00 PM
Thanks Carole for your loving comments.
Date: 2/4/2018 11:32:00 PM
Chastity is the jewel of a girl, I love this. I agree that modesty makes a woman more beautiful. Lovely poem, Muhammad Imtaiz.
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Date: 2/4/2018 11:51:00 PM
Thanks Becca for being honest about my words.............. It is honor for me to have words of appreciation from a great poet like you. I am not a poet just sometimes want to write my thoughts.........
Date: 2/4/2018 5:17:00 PM
Beautiful thoughts about the beauty of a girl.
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Muhammad Imtiaz
Date: 2/4/2018 10:54:00 PM
Thanks Susan being the first commenter on my new poem

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