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The Cyclone

The wind blows strongly The branches of trees dancing leaves and birds disturbed. It moves in circle Objects and sand rotate too Cyclone ravages.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 6:08:00 PM
you have vivid small verse here my new poet friend but not haiku http://sites.google.com/site/graceguts/essays/haiku-checklist this is very easy to understand 1 page to keep next to the computer. Hope this helps! Light & Love
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Date: 10/12/2011 1:33:00 AM
Nice little description of cyclone.
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Date: 10/10/2011 6:00:00 PM
When I close my eyes I can see your poem. Good work.
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Date: 10/10/2011 5:46:00 PM
Nice....I can see it in my minds eye. Good write.
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