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The Cool Breeze

the cool breeze stirring late august night ~ its dying breath Submitted on June 1, 2019 for PREMIER CONTEST NO.200 HAIKU sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 2ND Originally posted on August 29, 2018

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L. J. Carber

Date: 6/7/2019 8:28:00 AM

Very nice and very evocative, Line-- congrats!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2019 10:19:00 AM

Thank you so much, LJ. Enough with thoughts of a dying summer when it hasn't even begun yet. LOL

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/4/2019 8:28:00 PM

Your imagery is deep and captivating, Line. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2019 9:13:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/4/2019 3:04:00 PM

Nice win Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2019 3:08:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

P.M. Richter

Date: 6/4/2019 8:04:00 AM

Touching comparison ~ beautifully done.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, PM.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 6/4/2019 3:47:00 AM

In so few words, depth captured.. relating a breeze with last breath taking away life

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Debjani.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/4/2019 12:21:00 AM

Such a poignant write Line, beautiful... Sending many congrats on your win, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Ann.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 8/29/2018 11:58:00 AM

The power of poetry is that it turns "a dyiny breath" into a sigh of relief.. a room for hope.. a stride towards healing.. May every dark thought turns into light and life.. keep breathing love, light and beauty Line. Stay safe always.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/29/2018 12:47:00 PM

Lovely words of compassion. Thank you so much, Besma.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/29/2018 3:04:00 AM

very poignant Line:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/29/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, Jan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/29/2018 2:22:00 AM

Marvelous, and well-felt, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/29/2018 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, Caren, for your most appreciated visit and comment.