The Comet

I am heavy hot and mad
attracted by the same virtue in man
as I move in leaps and bounces
a puzzlement to the mind
shake the earth like a rag
as it speeds on its axis and wobbles
inverting magnetism north to south
you reset your compass and ask not why
you look and you don’t see until you panic
when in the sky appear the sun and I
which I may even smite
am I not heartless?
And leave you in the dark
three days and nights 

Third Place Winner: Caren Krutsinger Personification Contest 150
Fourth Place winner: Nina Parmenter-You Are A star-7/8/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 6/30/2021 4:24:00 PM
super personification Frances, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2021 8:57:00 PM
A great personification, Frances, congratulations on your win in Caren's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/12/2020 10:30:00 PM
Bright as your comet, Frances. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/10/2020 10:32:00 AM
A great romp through space! Congratulations, Frances!
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Date: 7/9/2020 7:46:00 PM
Enjoyed the ride through the sky, Frances. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 7/9/2020 1:14:00 AM
Loved the dreamy tale of a comet woven with your wonderful emotions Frances. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/8/2020 10:33:00 PM
Just adore those first two lines. Clever write and so happy to see you in a high placement with this.
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Date: 7/8/2020 6:51:00 PM
This is so cool. Thoroughly enjoyed! Congratulations for your win Frances, xomo!
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Date: 7/2/2020 7:44:00 PM
I'm just the CometMan...Nice one
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