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Written 12 April 2025

Finish My Poem Poetry Contest

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“If we sit down and gently gaze at a butterfly With a tranquil mind and calm spirit free from stress Like happiness, it may come and rest on our palm Heedless for a while, and then part away like the breeze.” -By author ************************************************************** The Butterfly As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew anointed with a gentle rain amidst sun showers she appears as if on cue Lifting her wings, she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue flight of fancy fanning fast, fabulous marvel, she is beauty true on true Behold her now sitting softly, silently on the palm of my hand As she ignites in me gleams of happiness like a delicate friend Once I try to grasp her by her wings, off she flies in the warm thin air And I am left dead speechless, standing soundlessly just at her to stare Like butterfly, happiness is sensitive, subtle and elusive It caresses the cheeks and soon flits away like the sweet summer breeze The seat of real happiness lies not outside, but rests within us, Pursuing it at the door of wealth or fame would simply be a fuss.

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Date: 4/22/2025 10:46:00 AM
In addition to being aesthetically pleasing, your poetry contains several profound truths. Your victory is much appreciated; congratulations!
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/23/2025 1:00:00 AM
Thank you dear poet for appreciating my complementary verses to the introductory part of MRR poem and your kind wishes. May divine light ever rest with you.
Date: 4/22/2025 7:37:00 AM
Love your quote Krishnanand. Nice complement to Vie's beginning. Congratulations! :)
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/23/2025 12:56:00 AM
Thank you dear poetess for appreciating my quote and my complement to MRR introductory verses. Wish you a pleasant day filled with smiles.
Date: 4/17/2025 11:17:00 PM
Your poem is not simply beautiful, but encloses a valid truth-"Like butterfly, happiness is sensitive, subtle and elusive It caresses the cheeks and soon flits away like the sweet summer breeze"... So very true. Congratulations dear friend on your win.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/18/2025 1:34:00 AM
Thank you, dear Valsa, for visiting my page, appreciating the above poem and your kind wishes. This means so much to me. Wish you a pleasant day filled with the light of divine blessings.
Date: 4/16/2025 6:12:00 PM
Thankyou for finishing my poem dear poets. It was a pleasure reading your poem. A big congrats to all my ten winners. I'm proud of all of you !
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/23/2025 12:51:00 AM
Thank you poetess for appreciating the complementary verses I added , with much pleasure, to your poem and for my placement in the contest sponsored by you. Wish you a delightful day filled with the light of blessings.
Date: 4/13/2025 10:22:00 PM
A real beauty. Best of luck in the contest
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 4/18/2025 1:21:00 AM
Thank you a lot belatedly, dear poetess, for your kind wishes which had somehow escaped my attention. Wish you a pleasant day filled with the light of blessings.

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