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4/5/2025 for Finish My Poem Poetry Contest sponsored by Mystic Rose Rose

As she drinks nectar from a flower, sweetness from heaven falls like dew anointed with a gentle rain amidst sun showers she appears as if on cue Lifting her wings she lands on a Zinnia beneath a tinted sky of April blue flight of fancy fanning fast, fabulous marvel, she is beauty true on true A curious witness to this mummer in Mother Nature's magnificent scheme she magically meanders in the mountain meadow by the flowing stream A youth, in floral print as new as Spring, wonders, is paradise what it may seem and after eighty Springs, an aged girl asks, was it more than just a dream

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Date: 4/22/2025 7:39:00 AM
Sweet Dave! Congratulations! :)
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David Crandall
Date: 4/22/2025 12:14:00 PM
Thanks elle!
Date: 4/19/2025 5:54:00 AM
Seamless! Congratulations! Xo
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David Crandall
Date: 4/19/2025 3:04:00 PM
Thanks Crystol!
Date: 4/16/2025 6:13:00 PM
Thankyou for finishing my poem dear poets. It was a pleasure reading your poem. A big congrats to all my ten winners. I'm proud of all of you !
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David Crandall
Date: 4/16/2025 6:39:00 PM
Thanks Mystic Rose. It was a fun experience. Glad I didn't too badly mess up your beautiful first couplets - :-))
Date: 4/8/2025 4:52:00 AM
Wow, David, this is so seamless it doesn't read like a collaboration! Definitely a top winner to me.
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David Crandall
Date: 4/8/2025 7:36:00 AM
Thanks Edward!
Date: 4/5/2025 8:44:00 PM
I love the aged girl because I feel like an aged boy. Good luck and thanks for sharing!
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David Crandall
Date: 4/5/2025 9:07:00 PM
Haha, thanks Benjamin. I've been writing a lot of aged boy poems, so I decided to switch it up - lol!

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