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The Blues

The blues you squeeze into your song. Without the grays, you don’t belong. The saxophone tonguing your grief; Downward, the tears’ a scathing relief. Turquoise battling the heavy waves. The flautist, grave, somberly braves The crashing shore of lighthouse lore. Sudden widows - the sea keeps score. The notes of navy grooves and plays The composite of the ships ablaze. Without the grays you don’t belong. The blues you squeeze into your song. The cobalt reed, a salty taste. The blues strum strings around your waist. The drums continuous throbbing; Aperture of buoys sobbing. Downward, the tears’ a scathing relief. The saxophone tonguing your grief. The blues you squeeze into your song. Without the grays, you don’t belong.

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Date: 1/7/2025 8:13:00 PM
This is an amazing poem, it is a masterpiece, Kim. The blues, wow, you really captured it well in this write.
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Date: 1/7/2025 5:16:00 PM
The language in this poem has a strong musicality, echoing the rhythms and sounds of blues music. The use of words like "tonguing," "grooves," "strum," and "throbbing" creates a strong auditory experience.
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Date: 1/7/2025 12:48:00 PM
- I think I've read this fourteen times, Kim...it brings so many emotions...excellent writing...love it :) - hugs
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Date: 1/7/2025 3:28:00 AM
Hi Kim.,your words describe the blues perfectly. xx
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Date: 1/6/2025 8:17:00 PM
'Sudden widows - the sea keeps score' -- That line sticks in my throat, Kim, and it won't come loose. Whoa...
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Date: 1/6/2025 12:50:00 PM
Wonderfully worded Kim....it has a sadness to it. You were in the navy weren't you? Debx
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Date: 1/6/2025 8:16:00 AM
Excellebt work, pangie xx
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Date: 1/6/2025 4:51:00 AM
I love all music...a full range of emotions as needed. Great poem! We must pray for our Nation.
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Date: 1/6/2025 2:41:00 AM
The music is sad. So many lost. But we will remember. Love poem, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2025 4:32:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 1/5/2025 5:06:00 PM
Gosh, I loved this, dear Kim. It has a haunting quality - with beautiful language.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/5/2025 6:00:00 PM
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

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