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The All We Are

You’ll hear it said, “Our lives are but a— Blink! …Hardly an instant-in-time In an infinite/cosmic timelinedesign…” But see That we are created each unique, Like snowflakes Swirling with incandescent beauty over lamplit streets… Bearing divinely bequeathed Patterns of particular possibilities… Our lives each shining to inspire, Like winking stars seen piercing the dark Like candles afire — Bright flames to flicker Hope over the suffering life may bring… ~ Like the grasses and flowers everywhere Purposed in the symphony of being To Grow from dust on ‘til wilting’s return to dust, all meant metaphors for each of us…

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Date: 4/22/2025 4:42:00 AM
Sally, I think you have a grasp on what life is all about. You put it eloquently. I suppose we do have to suffer, and that makes us understand a lot. We get to blossom and then.... You're making me smile!!
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Date: 3/20/2025 4:42:00 AM
Lovely, Joanna! Thank you for the peace this POTD brings!
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Date: 3/13/2025 1:31:00 PM
Quite a write..Albeit a musty one its quite a delight.' I trust all is well there.?
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Date: 3/8/2025 10:20:00 PM
so many fishes in the sea but no one like the other...stunning work on individuality and the precious hsndling of time...keep.on shining, sally and thanks for commenting on my poems!
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Date: 3/6/2025 3:21:00 AM
Great poem including metaphors and imagery.
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Date: 3/6/2025 1:09:00 AM
Ah what a deep and profound poem woven with such brilliant metaphors and imagery, i love the flow of your words and depth of what youv expressed here, truly hits the soul so very strong: we are all special in our own unique ways, and we all deserve to be celebrated and appreciate for our own individual special traits and characteristics as well as skills! I love the way youv used nature to depict so much! And this is what i believe too! Which is why it is easily a FAVE for me! Sending you light
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Date: 3/5/2025 9:55:00 PM
Our life may be short, but we are created unique and are entrusted with specific missions. Brief though our existence be, we are supposed to shed light like a candle or grow like flowers that sprout from soil and give joy until they wilt and return to soil. We should also thus fulfil our purpose until we return to dust. Beautiful poem, dear Sally.
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Date: 3/5/2025 12:02:00 PM
we are like metaphors but oh so much more , like a candle that burns bright, and before flickering out leaves the memory of its beautiful eternal flame So beautiful Sally, I enjoyed every word.
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Date: 3/4/2025 8:32:00 AM
"Our lives each shining to inspire, Like winking stars seen piercing the dark" -- there is no example of complete death or annihilation in the world. Just graceful and profound, abrupt change. Nothing goes out of existence...why should we be so different? Why not a universe of cooperative thought and feeling in a speck of sand? We know so little of death, even life...yet assume volumes full.
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Date: 3/4/2025 7:38:00 AM
God is eternal and we are a speck in time. Your imagery is wonderful and makes one think.
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Date: 3/4/2025 5:46:00 AM
Dear Sally, this was breathtaking! The way you weaved time, individuality, and purpose into a celestial and earthly dance was stunning. As I read I thought how your words shimmer with both wonder and wisdom almost like snowflakes, stars, and flames, each uniquely brilliant. A truly moving and inspiring piece! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/3/2025 10:38:00 PM
We are each truly unique, and yes, life sure does go by quickly, but we each have something to offer those on our journey, before the dust falls and our spirits fly home! Insightful poem Sally, I hope you are well <3
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Sally Eslinger
Date: 3/4/2025 3:21:00 AM
Thanks Bj!yes, i think every life from it’s formation, has a story, even if thatonly would focus on the two people who made him/her to then it’s stillbirth, or abortion, or life journey of 99 yrs. There are none with our fingerprints…God knows the # of hairs on each head! God does not see us as Groups, like immigrants or the conservatives, but as a son or daughter with a Meaning. xox sally

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