The Afternoon Sun

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Coursing through a cerulean blue sky the sun dazzles the mortal eye… Displaying the timeless art of light, through the host of sage trees, ignite… Arms of unfurled dappled leaves, reminisce as the warmth of a gentle breeze, imparts a kiss. Date: June 10, 2022 For: Bite-Size Poem #46 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2022 10:40:00 AM

A wonderful write/picture. So peaceful. Have a blessed day..........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/10/2022 1:31:00 PM

In Malta I would prefer the shade. Too sizzling hot.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/11/2022 10:05:00 AM

In New Jersey,USA we are having delightful afternoons, warm breezes and clear skies....sorry it is hot in Malta. :)Paulette

Kenneth Cheney

Date: 6/10/2022 8:11:00 AM

Lovely vision your poem imparts.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/10/2022 11:34:00 AM

I am glad you enjoyed it. The sun always amazes me, no matter the time of day, it is always poetry in motion. thanks for stopping by to visit. :)Paulette