Tanka- 2

without- the waning sun warms my face shalom cloaks the wells within

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2012 10:22:00 PM

wow,it IS good, Brian, and it is different syllable count from regular tanka too. Very cool win. Congratulations.

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2012 2:22:00 PM

I like this Brian. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2012 10:37:00 PM

BRIAN , Congratulations with your beautiful win, in B E Susan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/2/2012 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations Brian, on your winning Tanka. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2012 10:24:00 AM

congrats Brian on an awesome win for these elegant lines luv.. always an enjoyment to read u ..

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/2/2012 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations Brian on your win...huggsss,deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Brian. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/2/2012 8:57:00 AM

Very nice contempolrary tanka.