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swaying

the right men in charge the right banner the right flag~ the right dead babies ***

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/24/2024 1:03:00 PM

Maureen, you have created a masterpiece here. I'm making it a favorite. The structure adds to the power of your message.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/27/2024 8:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Duke. Am trying to get my noodle back into the poetics… this forced it’s way out of me, I had to stand back and let it happen ;), xomo!

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/18/2024 8:01:00 AM

Powerful and soul searing!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/19/2024 5:30:00 AM

Thank you Crystol! xomo

Karen Jones

Date: 7/17/2024 12:03:00 PM

Wow! This is hard hitting and so real so raw! Great Senryu!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/18/2024 4:57:00 AM

Thank you Karen! I try ;), xomo

John Lawless

Date: 7/17/2024 7:12:00 AM

when the left is right all that's left is right

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/17/2024 7:41:00 AM

Swaying to a standstill, right, um er, correct you are. ;),

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2024 6:04:00 AM

Supercharged write! The drum beating with right.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/17/2024 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Kim! xomo :),

Jeff Connelly

Date: 7/17/2024 5:57:00 AM

Correct Maureen. Don't turn left; right? Hugs

Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/17/2024 6:39:00 AM

so true. Id love to drive and get caught in that kind of continuum...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/17/2024 5:58:00 AM

We need more roundabouts. ;),

Tom Woody

Date: 7/17/2024 5:42:00 AM

Oof! You didn't pull any punches here. There's no such thing as the "right leader". They're all bloodguilty in one way or another. Ditto the clergy

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/17/2024 5:51:00 AM

I do my best in seventeen or less. I agree with you x2.