Superstar

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Orange megastar of rosy early morning skies, Richer than all of the others' remote sparkling, Powerful, charming and extremely charismatic, Drawing all of nature, and the beautiful people. Sunset stunner, captivating the adoring press, Though black space is your permanent address! A reclusive eccentric superstar, and so creative, For the summertime is overcrowded with blooms. And during nights, you lend light to pale moon! Super rich and possessing the gold Midas touch, The gazes of red sunflowers are on you all day!

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Alexis Y.

Date: 9/6/2021 12:57:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, I like where you went with this piece. I agree, nature has many superstars. Excellent job:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2021 3:13:00 PM

Thank you very much for those warm sentiments, Alexis. Have a wonderful week. :D

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/5/2021 8:00:00 AM

Evelyn, Your writing is lovely and has the capacity to evoke the beauty of the bloom. I love it! A gentle, captivating flower that attracts everyone, regardless of age or background, all day and night. Poetry is not only beautiful, but it is its own blossom.