Sunup Ditty

the dawn is breaking cardinal tweets wake-up song ~ humanity yawns Date written: 01/27/2022

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/2/2022 5:48:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Edward:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/2/2022 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jo:-)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/30/2022 4:02:00 AM

Picture perfect Haiku, Edward! Enjoyed

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/30/2022 6:33:00 AM

Thank you, Seeker:-) I'm glad you did, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2022 10:22:00 PM

oh this is so cute.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/30/2022 6:33:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea:-)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/27/2022 11:19:00 AM

Perfect picture of the sights and sounds of morning Edward. Being a night owl, I don't see many dawns but your words paint a perfect picture of the ones I have experienced. Love "humanity yawns." Blessings my friend.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/27/2022 11:57:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sam:-) It's always a delight to hear from you.