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Sunset at Kiawah

Kiawah's sun dips, Marshes blush in soft pastels, Spring whispers low. Egrets dance in twilight's grace, Day ends in a gentle sigh.

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Date: 5/6/2024 3:59:00 PM
you've pictured such a tranquil scene with your words. An engaging and perfectly written Tanka. Faving this one...it's just beautiful. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Don Iannone
Date: 5/6/2024 11:03:00 PM
Thanks Sara. Kiawah Island is really a lovely place to enjoy the ocean, beach, and much else. Hope you’re well. Don
Date: 5/6/2024 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful poetic vista Don
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Don Iannone
Date: 5/6/2024 11:02:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. It’s beautiful here. Awoke to a sky filled with stars over the ocean. Cheers. Don

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