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Sunrise, Thorns

Sunrise, Thorns Like a sunrise over a frozen lake, swept by wind, you burst into my life. The illusion of warmth flowed over me and filled me until that day when you left. Now alone I wander; chilled, now worse because you had covered me with warmth. Where does one go to hide from conscience-ness - to hide from dreams? Where does one go to hide from unwanted reality, to try to stitch things back together into a quilt that makes some semblance of sense? Where does one go to escape the sunshine that is remembered so vividly that it pains? Where does one go to find solace in the cold emptiness of the wind-swept lake? That first day when you had left, light faded and I was impaled on the thorns of the rose that I had sought.

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Date: 3/5/2022 1:14:00 PM
Life happens, "Tis better to have loved and lost, then to have never loved at all--Alfred Lord Tennison. Beautiful verse.
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Date: 10/13/2021 6:59:00 PM
Wonderful piece you have here. :)
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David Holmes
Date: 10/21/2021 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Romnia - I appreciate you reading and taking time to comment David
Date: 10/31/2019 10:55:00 PM
"Like a sunrise over a frozen lake swept by wind, you burst into my life." This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Sometimes love whispers softly along the skin, and then- disappears. You feel cold and alone. Your thought caress gently around my heart. Welcome to Poetry Soup. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/14/2019 11:46:00 AM
For a first post, you showed us outstanding work, David. Best poem I think I saw today. FAVE
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David Holmes
Date: 10/14/2019 11:53:00 AM
Andrea - wow, thank you wildly, so appreciate your comments and taking time to read my poem. DHolmes
Date: 10/13/2019 8:22:00 AM
Superbly crafted my friend... you're a super souper...welcome aboard the crazy train lol...you know that most poets are a little bit crazy...oh well, time to go feed my crocodiles at the petting zoo lol...^WW^ :o)
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David Holmes
Date: 10/13/2019 9:02:00 AM
Winged - you are so right, poets are a bit crazy, only wish I had a few crocodiles to feed - I've got a few feral cats, does that count? Thanks for taking the time to read and comment - David
Date: 10/13/2019 6:29:00 AM
Hi David, A warm welcome to PS from one newbie to another. I haven't commented on many poems as yet (I will be putting that right though) but just wanted to comment on your poem: "Sunrise, Thorns" It's a very powerful piece that captures the pain of loss 'beautifully' if that's the right word to use. Perhaps it isn't. Poems can be a wonderful means of catharsis. Well done!
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David Holmes
Date: 10/13/2019 9:01:00 AM
Gary, thanks for taking time to read my poem, poems Can be a wonderful means of catharsis - I'm looking forward to being a part of the "soup" David
Date: 10/12/2019 10:50:00 AM
What an incredible first poem. I can see that you will fit in nicely. Welcome to the soup and thanks for commenting on my Broken People poem.
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David Holmes
Date: 10/12/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Richard, I am really enjoying the "soup" - and looking forward to growing and learning.
Date: 10/7/2019 12:35:00 PM
Very nicely written David! Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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David Holmes
Date: 10/7/2019 1:42:00 PM
Kulkarni - thank you and thank you for the Welcome - I'm looking forward to learning and growing DHolmes
Date: 10/6/2019 11:05:00 AM
Welcome to poetry Soup :)
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David Holmes
Date: 10/6/2019 1:02:00 PM
Thank you - I'm looking forward to learning more about the website and learning, growing and improving.
Date: 10/6/2019 10:33:00 AM
This poem is superb! Very well done :)
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David Holmes
Date: 10/6/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thank you Heidi - it's the first poem I've posted, I'm glad you enjoyed the read D

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