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Sunrise Aglow

mellow yellow sky glistens upon morning dew hummingbird flutters Entry: Sunrise Haiku Contest Sponsor P.D. Written: 11/17/2011 12th Place Winner

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/2/2012 7:12:00 PM

Love it Carol, the hummingbird provides such magic.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/28/2011 9:45:00 AM

beautiful image! congrats on your win in pd's contest :)

Kash Poet

Date: 11/27/2011 7:14:00 AM

Wonderful haiku here Carol.Congratulations on your win.Thanks for all your congrats messages at my poems.

Jack Horne

Date: 11/24/2011 2:24:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Carol. A very happy Thanksgiving to you, my friend : )

Davin Math

Date: 11/24/2011 12:34:00 AM

That's awesome...well done Carol!

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/23/2011 5:05:00 PM

Do you remember the song "Mellow Yellow" by Donovan? Fine haiku! Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/23/2011 4:30:00 PM

tis a beauty Carol! congratulations on your fine win here in the contest.

George Aul

Date: 11/23/2011 2:47:00 PM

A beautiful picture...........George

Greg Stanley

Date: 11/20/2011 10:38:00 PM

Very nice imagery - and a joy to read. Thanks for posting. Greg S.

James Fraser

Date: 11/20/2011 12:54:00 PM

A joy to view through the window Carol. Isn't it amazing what simple words can paint, kinda terrific to be honest. Have a lovely Sunday Carol :)

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 10:44:00 AM

cool haiku makes me thirsty too peace to you and yours

Jack Horne

Date: 11/19/2011 2:22:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Carol. Many congrats on all your wins and thanks, I enjoyed your contest : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2011 11:31:00 PM

this was a glowing little gem. Congrats on the win. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2011 9:25:00 PM

Congrats Carol on a wonderful win for this creative perfection Haiku for PD luv..

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/18/2011 8:43:00 PM

Oh Carol what a lovely day it will be! Hug Lizzie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/18/2011 6:51:00 PM

Such a delightful haiku, Carol. Love the image of the hummingbird fluttering. Congratulations on you win in the contest. Have a happy Thanksgiving, hon. Love, Carolyn

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/18/2011 6:19:00 PM

Here we are, all, under the same rising sun...Congratulations on your win, my dear Carol!!! Love, iolanda

Don Johnson

Date: 11/18/2011 3:45:00 PM

thank you for your great comments, johnsons gone do not lament, no times...

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/18/2011 2:50:00 PM

Just enjoyed your poem Carol,, really like the first line, it all follows so well from there..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 11:11:00 AM

Thank you for your comments and congrats. They mean so much to me as do you all. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/18/2011 9:08:00 AM

Carol many congrats on your brilliant win, takes me back to my youth this one..David

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations Carol. Very nice.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2011 3:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:35:00 AM

CAROL, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 10:06:00 PM

Very pretty, sweet lady. And I thank thee for my win in the white pumpkin contest.