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Sun you shine so brightly. Radiating, giving energy with your warm golden glow. We cannot live without you. Your solar smile beams soothing rays, from many a million miles away yet still I can feel you kissing my skin. 3rd May 2016

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Valerie Staton

Date: 1/25/2019 8:46:00 AM

Cute!

Carole Duet

Date: 5/7/2018 6:20:00 PM

I love this little etheree, Jan. So clever and full of warmth. And, where in the world did you find this perfect illustration?

Tsakiso Maluleke

Date: 5/25/2016 2:25:00 AM

TOUNCHING AND STRAIGHT TO THE POINT..

Jan Allison
Date: 5/25/2016 11:54:00 AM

Thanks Tsakiso:-) hugs jan xx

Funom Makama

Date: 5/12/2016 11:26:00 AM

Straight from the heart with a cleanser for the mind. A powerful seven and an absolute wonder.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Funom:-) hugs Jan xx

Archontoula Alexandropoulou

Date: 5/7/2016 1:07:00 PM

Alliteration brimming with warm sounds and colours. Lovely

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thanks Archontoula:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Schneiter

Date: 5/5/2016 10:16:00 PM

The words and the artwork--awesome. The last line--perfect. (And you make it look so easy [but I know it isn't].) hugs xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/9/2016 6:29:00 AM

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Paul - I love the final line too - I am just thankful my muse is behaving at the moment - she does get stroppy like a teenager sometimes and the words won't flow lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/5/2016 9:47:00 AM

Excellent poem my lovely friend written very nicely. Thanks for sharing. Good luck if for contest. (+7)Loved always, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2016 11:17:00 AM

Just a fun write BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Walter T. Ashe

Date: 5/4/2016 10:20:00 PM

Your write is about the Love for our universe's light and warmth source! And yes, "we cannot live without you!" A write with a warm smile to it!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2016 2:26:00 AM

Thanks Walter :-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/4/2016 12:20:00 PM

p.s. though my skin remains pale:)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2016 4:05:00 PM

Mine too:-) hugs jan xx

Jill Spagnola

Date: 5/4/2016 12:18:00 PM

Jan, I love how your adoration of the center of our "System" is displayed by the many forms you lovingly create giving it's righteous place in poetry:) a sunshiny 7 from me! with love, jill

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2016 4:05:00 PM

Thanks Jill - i am not a great sun worshiper but I do love walking with mum on a sunny spring day. None of us have ever been beach babes even though we live only 5 mins from a glorious golden beach:-) hugs jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/4/2016 7:34:00 AM

How beautiful!! :) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2016 7:55:00 AM

Thanks Sneha:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 5/4/2016 7:13:00 AM

Reminds me of my sun worshiping youth Jan. By coincidence, my mother also died from malignant melanoma.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2016 7:18:00 AM

I have never been a great sun worshipper - dad actually had 3 forms of cancer when he died but had always lead us to believe it was basal skin cancer he had, so to learn he had malignant melanoma was a bit of a shock too:-( hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/4/2016 5:40:00 AM

- I love the sun kiss, Jan :) - # 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2016 7:17:00 AM

I somehow thought you would like this one dear friend Sun:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/4/2016 3:11:00 AM

Beautiful:) Though here in India, people don't much like the sun:) Yet, it's true that we can't live without the sun:) And thank you very much for soup mail. I'm glad you don't mind:):}

Jan Allison
Date: 5/4/2016 7:16:00 AM

No worries Jo we all get inspired by the theme and often similar ideas crop up:-) thanks for commenting on this poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2016 5:22:00 PM

Very nice Etheree Jan...best wishes

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2016 5:23:00 PM

Thanks Jospeh just a fun write - it was a gorgeous spring day on the Island and this little poem came to me:-) hugs janxx

Tom Quigley

Date: 5/3/2016 4:33:00 PM

Very nice! This is a neat form; I ought to try it...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2016 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Tom I think it is only the second one I have written - was inspired by a glorious spring day here on our little Island:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 5/3/2016 4:31:00 PM

That was a nice conversation you had with the sun, Jan. No wonder he smiles down upon you.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/3/2016 4:33:00 PM

Its been a gorgeous day Lin mum and I had a lovely walk in the sunshine:-) In fact it's been a fabulous day all round:-) hugs Jan xx