summer sun

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(Entry for Summer Haiku Contest, submitted June 25, 2024 - Third Place)

summer sun on sea... evanescent flecks of light... fairyfolk dancing.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2024 9:47:00 AM

Cute and creative. One of my favorites

Jim Healey
Date: 7/3/2024 10:15:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. Glad you liked it. Cheers from Canada, Jim

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 10:45:00 PM

How nice! congratulations dear poet.

Jim Healey
Date: 7/3/2024 5:22:00 AM

Thank you very much, and congratulations to you as well. Very nice haiku.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/2/2024 4:24:00 PM

Jim, congratulations on your winning placement, wonderful imagery.

Jim Healey
Date: 7/2/2024 5:57:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. Glad you enjoyed it. Take care, Jim