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golden sunflowers bask in the warmth of the sun blackbird pecks at worms Non Human Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke 06/16/20

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Arturo Michael

Date: 6/19/2020 7:01:00 PM

nice imagery...for a black bird feast...

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2020 4:45:00 PM

thanks Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 6/19/2020 6:34:00 PM

Well envisioned and nicely crafted Haiku! Thanks for sharing, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2020 4:45:00 PM

thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Tahira Parveen

Date: 6/19/2020 3:13:00 PM

Nice write Jan. Lovely pic of sunflowers. Nice and colorful. x

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 3:16:00 PM

thanks Tahira:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 6/19/2020 10:00:00 AM

Jan the picture always enhances the poem. Love the imagery. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:50:00 PM

thanks Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/18/2020 6:43:00 PM

Nice imagery! Fan of blackbirds especially redwinged variety.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:50:00 PM

thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/18/2020 12:11:00 PM

I like the sunflowers. Nice to read this today. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:49:00 PM

thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/17/2020 9:52:00 PM

Sunflowers are one of my favorites, this is so golden, like a warm hug, enjoyed reading!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:49:00 PM

I adore the flowers they always make me smile, I'mg growing short ones this year with multiple heads:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/17/2020 2:26:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Jan :) - A winning poem in my eyes ... best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:48:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/17/2020 1:45:00 PM

But cardinals love sunflower seeds! I trust your mother remembered you! How did your meeting go? Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:47:00 PM

we dont have cardinals but I am growing sunflowers - some from seed and some plants i got. mum was fine I've managed to see her twice this week!:-) hugs jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/17/2020 11:49:00 AM

I really enjoyed your haiku Kan! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:46:00 PM

thanks Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/17/2020 9:08:00 AM

Very good haiku, Jan. I can't write a good haiku, but I can recognize one. :-) Janice

Jan Allison
Date: 6/19/2020 2:46:00 PM

I am sure you have written many good ones, i never know if its a true haiku or not just write and hope:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2020 11:27:00 PM

Superb contrast, Jan... Somehow found it tickled my funny-bone as well. Great haiku! Cheers, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2020 5:07:00 AM

Glad it made you smile:-) hugs Jan xx

W.A. Cholt

Date: 6/16/2020 6:53:00 PM

Very nice indeed. Best wishes for the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 6/17/2020 5:07:00 AM

Thanks w a:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/16/2020 3:51:00 PM

Lovely image Jan, there's a field by us full of them, they grow so tall. Good luck in the contest Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2020 3:56:00 PM

I got some short stubby ones with multiple flowers on and they look lovely in my border not sure if its suitable for the contest but there was only one space left so i doubt it will place:-)hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/16/2020 3:42:00 PM

beautiful, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/16/2020 3:50:00 PM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx