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Summer Afternoon

glass sweats as ice melts sweet refreshment entices grass won’t cut itself

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/17/2017 9:02:00 AM

So great and excellent. Three words underrating this magnificient piece which has dragged my mind in the viscose silk of awe to really lack what to say. A definite 7 friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/15/2017 8:57:00 PM

Really made me smile Joseph I agree the grass won't cut itself thankfully hubby has the keys to the garden shed and I can make him a nice iced drink for when he's finished lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/14/2017 4:25:00 PM

I can see it perfectly, Joseph. Good one!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2017 4:17:00 AM

- A great haiku, Joseph - hugs // Sun :)