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Suicide Mind

What makes the decision To flick the switch To end ones life For the sake of it Troubled, debts Bullied at school Fork in the road To let death rule Mums, dads Daughters and sons What ever affects them They just can't outrun Sadness and tears By all left behind Will they ever understand Suicide Mind

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Harry Horsman

Date: 5/23/2021 7:02:00 AM

Just read this James, so today it is, the topic will not go away, Yes your poem so poignant deep and ever so sad. The world today has to plead guilty, the pressure on society especially the young is overbearing...Stay well my friend. Harry

A Yorkshire Poet

Date: 1/18/2016 4:25:00 PM

Insightful write. Cheers.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/9/2014 11:45:00 PM

I don't think they can fully understand unless they have struggled with the same feelings. Sadly it is a permanent solution to a temporary problem.

James Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 3:31:00 PM

It sure is a door when one goes through and your greeted by 'Wheels of Confusion' <*> thank you Richard, James......

Lexy Goodluck

Date: 3/19/2014 6:27:00 PM

This is a great poem! Very short and straight to the chase.:)

Eric Nolan

Date: 11/29/2009 1:16:00 PM

Hard hitting and simple, in my opinion: Brilliant ! Makes me wonder why I didn't think of it first.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2009 10:40:00 AM

Bringing to light a subject that needs to be address. Sara

Melody Coster

Date: 6/13/2009 11:44:00 AM

Hi James. This piece got to me but in a good way. My mother tried 4 times to end her life before getting the right help and medications she needed to help her live out her life before passing in piece in Gods time. No one, including myself could ever fully understand what was going on within herself despite her trying to explain. Sometimes even they don't know themselves. This helped me to remember her in a good way and to better understand her a little. Great write. Melody?

Erica Buckner

Date: 5/27/2009 2:30:00 PM

That's really sad =[.Thank you so much for commenting my poems

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 5/9/2009 8:21:00 AM

well done, and very true. sad write, but beautiful. thanks so much for the comment. <3 madison

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/25/2009 4:05:00 AM

James, Well said. I understand. If you don't mind, please read this poem that I wrote. http://www.poetrysoup.com/member_area/edit_my_poem.aspx?PoemID=149900 I am enjoying your poetry. And I'm OK. God blesses us all in His way. Stay strong and keep writing! Always, Dane