Suddenly the Bird Sings

suddenly the bird sings, quite suddenly, startling
the stranger-to-the-dawn of day; he thinks the bird
is where the bird shouldn’t be; but knowingly,
with amusement, having quite habitually heard
the bird tweet, as the morning sun stretches its wings,
the wife informs the stranger to the waning dusk,
“oh dear husband, the bird sings from the tree,”
but he must widen the slats of the levolor blinds,
to open his eyes, to the world that exists above
his office in the split level basement. where did he think
the melody resounded from - the deck? no,
the great by and by, the bluest sky, the sun’s rays…
its hazy, at best. the mind needs a rest…startled

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Date: 1/14/2025 11:10:00 AM
Dear Kim, what a masterpiece—delicate, profound, and so alive with meaning. Congratulations on POTD! Your words awaken the mind and heart, like that sudden bird singing. Beautifully done! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2025 1:00:00 PM
You are always so uplifting! I appreciate you so!
Date: 1/13/2025 10:04:00 AM
Love this and see it had a huge impact on others as well. Nice one and congratulations Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2025 1:00:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! Glad so many liked it!
Date: 1/10/2025 12:26:00 AM
Great descriptive POTD. Loved the stranger-to-the-dawn of day. Well done :) M.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:11:00 AM
LOL…thank you!
Date: 1/8/2025 9:11:00 PM
Kim, I love the humor of your referring to your “dear husband” as “the stranger-to-the-dawn of day” and “the stranger to the waning dusk.” :-) Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Mark…lol
Date: 1/8/2025 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Bird's beautiful songs are a joy to hear. This happy poem is uplifting with rhythm in its words.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:12:00 AM
So glad it was uplifting!
Date: 1/8/2025 7:17:00 PM
Simple moments are beautiful, indeed. As the melody lingers, it brings inner happiness. Birds are so elegant and graceful. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:34:00 AM
Thank you, Brandy!
Date: 1/8/2025 5:44:00 PM
So beautiful - congrats on POTD! I loved this, written like only you can - <3 :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:34:00 AM
You are so sweet, Paige! Thank you!
Date: 1/8/2025 1:37:00 PM
Kim, such a beautiful moving poem, I loved it a lot, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:35:00 AM
And I send you a lot of love, sweet Constance! xx
Date: 1/8/2025 12:44:00 PM
Kim - Always look forward to your submissions. I'm a fan and this poem is one if the reasons why. Congratulations on your POTD. Best -Ken
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:36:00 AM
I appreciate you! Thank you!
Date: 1/8/2025 11:24:00 AM
Kim congratulations on this lovely Poetry of yours receiving POTD such a high Honor for you to receive. Again Congratulations and well deserved...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/10/2025 6:36:00 AM
Thank you, Mike! Hugs
Date: 1/8/2025 10:22:00 AM
Sweet poem Kim! Congratulations on POTD! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 11:05:00 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 1/8/2025 9:12:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congrats on your POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 11:05:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 1/8/2025 8:59:00 AM
A captivating poem, Kim! Congratulations on POTD. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 11:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Evelyn!
Date: 1/8/2025 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed your creative write. We can find many things to write about as our day goes on. Have a blessed day with your win.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 11:04:00 AM
We sure can! Let’s keep it fresh! Hugs, Paula!
Date: 1/8/2025 6:42:00 AM
I like the depth of this poem. It's obviously so much more than a simple "bird poem on many levels. Thought-provoking indeed. Kudos & write on, Terrell
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, Terrell!
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Terrell Martin
Date: 1/8/2025 6:43:00 AM
Date: 1/8/2025 5:29:00 AM
Hi Kim I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem, congratulations on being chosen for the POTD. xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 1/8/2025 3:56:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem Kim, it was a great read. Congratulations on your POTD win. Have a wonderful day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:23:00 AM
Thank you, Zyrool!
Date: 1/8/2025 2:47:00 AM
Fantabulous bird poem, Kim. A great selection POTD. Bravissimo! Enjoy your special poetry day. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:23:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 1/8/2025 2:33:00 AM
Kim what a charming write! Enjoyed! Congratulations on potd!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:22:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 1/8/2025 2:30:00 AM
Kim, a sweet poem, I love to hear the birds sing early in the morning. Congratulations on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:22:00 AM
Thank you, Tania! You and me poetry-sis!
Date: 1/8/2025 1:54:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Kim - Many little birds on the bird feeder ... but they don't sing ... fighting for food through the cold winter - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:21:00 AM
I may not hear any today…soo cold. Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 1/8/2025 1:38:00 AM
How I love to hear birds singing in the trees Kim, I really enjoyed this humorous read. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:21:00 AM
Thanks, Beryl! Yes, I love my mornings, especially in the Spring!
Date: 1/8/2025 12:32:00 AM
Enjoyed the humour in your verse Kim. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:20:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 1/7/2025 8:50:00 PM
This combination of so many different styles of poesy is an absolute treat, Kim. FAVE, FAVE, FAVE. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2025 4:20:00 AM
Oh my! Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 1/7/2025 7:37:00 PM
I'm glad this (your?) husband heard a bird and got a rest. This poem took me out of my room and into the tree, and the great sky, and the blue by and by, a better place to be, I think your poem just saved me a shrink.
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David Crandall
Date: 1/7/2025 7:54:00 PM
He needs to get out more often :-))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2025 7:51:00 PM
Smiling! Yes, this poem was inspired by yesterday morning. I got a kick out of my husband trying to figure out where the bird was. :)
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