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Sudden Urge

A SUDDEN URGE I suddenly feel the urge To tell it all You want to taunt me Go right ahead My own mind haunts me Jump out of bed The wicked one said Soon I will be dead Fearing my life Ending it all Enable me knife My name you do call As dumb as they come I frost all the air You heat up the light A game, I strip and you stare A game with no love I do not play fair I' LL still send you a kiss For not wanting to care I call it a truce Just toss the coin in, my dear The last fresh air I use I know you will be there A puppet you say, Abuse me you may In time, it won't matter I am yours any- way Tormented, I' m not Later I' LL rot Watching over me Is that all you got? A sinner by day, a sinner by night Spilling the milk, spilling the beans You have my attention, you know what I mean. by: The Lovely POET DESTROYER

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/6/2015 11:00:00 AM
Slamming in free verse is right up your street, Linda! Kept my attention to attention:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/13/2015 1:26:00 PM
Linda, we all have our days my friend. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:52:00 PM
Linda What powerful and deep words. You were sure not liking someone with this write. LOL Thanks for the placement in your contest with my January poem.
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Date: 12/14/2012 10:41:00 AM
i'm nobody's fool she says....
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Date: 10/18/2012 5:04:00 PM
Yes!! I had this sudden urge to regurge, not about your poem. It's just been that kind of day. You be bad. Love, daver
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Date: 10/18/2012 4:02:00 PM
Well done on the featuring of this one P D.."
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Date: 10/18/2012 10:47:00 AM
Well you got my attention too PD, loved your write here, have a good day, love debra
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Date: 10/18/2012 10:24:00 AM
Brilliant tiger :-)
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:47:00 AM
Congrats PD on the feature. From Billy Joel "I'd rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints."
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Date: 10/18/2012 7:07:00 AM
My biggest congratulations on your featured poem by very dear friend, PD! love/hugs:)LG
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Date: 7/16/2010 5:17:00 PM
I KNOW you can write Slam...you can not change the form title and make the write be something other than what it is....I challenge you to write different forms ;) this is not narrative form it's slam (very good of course!) but I think you can be more than a one trick pony? ( Deb ducks the pie!)
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Date: 7/13/2010 11:10:00 AM
i love it.it seems like you have a small suicidal streak.i like the way you play russian roulette with words.you use them like weapons of war. and like pat benatar said, "love is a battlefield" till death do us part as the world falls apart
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:17:00 AM
oops sorry!! my comments sure are coming in installments here--just clarified that I meant "watch out for my contest entry for the about me contest (Amy Green's contest)---hahah sorry my mind's floating somewhere--probably chasing dinner--have to go in a few....
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:08:00 AM
"watch up??"did I just say that? maybe I meant "watch up doc, HAHAHA wassup I meant)-- apparently I did--haha my brain must've been stuck on that roof--lol--no I really meant--"watch out"!!
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:04:00 AM
haha yup I'm a big sissy, not being able to climb trees--I'm weird that way but I love climbing up a roof & picking mangoes from up there! more stable stuff to walk on I suppose ;) & hey no fair! I aid a had no life first haha I get dibs on it--kidding--now I must tell You--don't say that you have no life! I'm 29 & still don't know where I'm going, ugh...watch up for my about me contest entry ;)....still in the works though...
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:59:00 AM
to borrow a line from you, now I feel the urge to put a note in my writes "not based on my life"--- & I take that back, I didn't mean boring--more like an impostor! oh my gosh--I think that sounds worse...hmm...
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:46:00 AM
you sure got me hooked with this write all the way to the end (like in all your writes)! thanks for all your comments p.d.--have to tell you though--my sijo aren't based on my own experiences (my life's That boring!)--all from imagination right now...we don't even have Spring here--just a rainy & summer season--so n ospring, no climbing trees, no bee stings, no allergies, no hubby, no kids, but hopefully not no life ;) haha...this suddenly makes me look so boring...thanks again! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:44:00 AM
Loved this one brilliant work Poet ... thanks for the great comments on my poetry much appreciated love Jayne
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Date: 6/1/2010 10:15:00 AM
You have a way of capturing one's attention with your words.. Enjoyed this one too ~ WN
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:30:00 AM
WHOA!!!! LOVE THIS POEM AND I LOVE YA STYLE. I GIVE YOU 5 STARS AND MORE!
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:57:00 PM
also, i have to be in the right mood to slam, without even really knowing that im writing one.when i wrote blind as a bat.i was pissed.so you see, thats what comes out.lol but it won't be my last, i should think on it more.thanks(: -always
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Date: 5/11/2010 9:03:00 AM
this captured me. amazing work.
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Date: 5/7/2010 4:24:00 PM
I had a sudden urge to return the bulk of chicken fescies you've been leaving on my pages. Here ya go> ,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=..............-=...-=....-=....-=...-=.............-=...-,...-=.....-=..-=..-=.............theKidster WASN'T here, MB-All Rights Reserved MMD
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Date: 5/5/2010 3:02:00 PM
Very Good!!! Love the way you express yourself... glad you liked my last poem Michael
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Date: 5/5/2010 9:14:00 AM
Deep, PD! Always interesting! Thanks for comments on my poem...appreciate your support...Peace, Audrey
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