Strawberry Dreams

Sleep slides from brown eyes Strawberry dreams sweet arrive Sleep apnea dies

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/21/2024 8:56:00 AM

Simply spectacular. I loved your alliteration.

Karen Jones
Date: 7/21/2024 9:10:00 AM

Thanks so much Victor!

Ink Empress

Date: 7/21/2024 7:44:00 AM

Do you have sleep apnea dear karen? I know few that do: beautiful haiku i love strawberry dreams! That would be perfect to use as a prompt too! Well delivered. Always a pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always

Ink Empress
Date: 7/21/2024 12:28:00 PM

Lupus must be even harder, you are very strong dear Karen. Hugs

Karen Jones
Date: 7/21/2024 8:50:00 AM

Yes I have sleep apnea Inky. I hate it but feel somehow I will not have it forever. I don’t follow Drs orders but neither did I for Lupus and that is in remission! Glory to God! Love and light hugs returned!