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Jack and Jim stood up to sing a hymn Jack's voice broke Jim's did choke Both did croak Through their pain They both did gain Praise in heav'n for singing to Him

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Date: 1/14/2024 7:54:00 AM
LOL. I guess that counts for something. Very cute poem Denis :)
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Denis Bruce
Date: 1/14/2024 10:02:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for even noticing that throwaway verse. It is so kind of you to comment so graciously upon it.

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