STORM

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Written, July 8, 2024
For The Contest, “Tank-A-Crostic Time Again”
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich

Somber summer storm Teases dark clouds with lightning Orthodox at first- Reforms with loud thunder booms Morphing war midst armored skies

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2024 3:19:00 PM

Clever imagery , Sandra. I am nitpicky and couldn't get over morphing not being followed by the word "into". Congrats. Your picture is really cool too.

Jeanette Swan

Date: 7/9/2024 4:08:00 AM

I like the armoured skies, and somber has the right sound, for me, for big sky poetry. J :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/8/2024 6:50:00 PM

Great imagery!